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Vidrio

Post by Vidrio on Fri Jul 11, 2014 3:42 pm

vidrio


[Attributes]
Power - *****
Agility - *****
Toughness - *
Intelligence -***
Willpower -****

[Basic Information]
Full Name: vidrio
Alias: Lost demon, Smoldering rage
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Birthday: 19th of February
Sexuality: Straight

[Characteristics]
Height: 6"1'
Weight: 58 lbs
Hair: Black
Eyes: Black but red when magic is being used.

General Appearance: Vidrio is a tall-ish Black haired young man with his hair in a (for lack of better words) spikey mess. Vidrio's eyes are usually a charcoal black in color but glow red when his magic is being used. vidrio usually goes about his days completely shirtless, except in colder climates where he wears a fur lined black cloak. Vidrio wears black finger-less gloves that end just below his shoulders. Around the gloves he has haphazardly wrapped red leather strips to offer some medium of protection. Vidrio wears simple black cargo pants as his leg apparel. Vidrio's body type is very lean and is built to utilize speed efficiently.

Personality: Vidrio is a very sarcastic person, so much so that he has almost perfected the art of sarcasm. Beyond the layers upon layers of sarcasm, Vidrio is somewhat Rough and animalistic, but a nice person in general. Vidrio has a tendency to wear his heart on his metaphorical sleeve and is an honest person when the situation demands it. He makes friends somewhat easily and is loyal to his friends and partners. Vidrio has never been in a romantic relationship, mainly because romance is the one idea that makes him shy or embarrassed, and when close to entering a romantic relationship, manages to talk himself into believing that he isn't good enough for the object of his affections. After a while of this Vidrio has all but given up on romance and has stated more than once that he is the only person without a soul-mate. Vidrio has been described as a funny, friendly and kind person multiple times, and has often helped fellow mages without need for reward. There have been reports however, that vidrio would snap at the drop of a hat. Other reports would state that he would grow cold randomly or, stare out into the distance for hours on end. Vidrio himself has noticed it and suspects it to be the personalities of the demons leaking into his own. This theory was further cemented when he discovered that he would refer to himself as "we" in conversation, or refer to other people as "humans" as if he wasn't one himself
likes:

  • seeing new types of magic
    meeting dragonslayers
    music
    happy couples
    sarcasm

Dislikes:

  • slavery
    dark mages
    insanity
    clouds
    rain

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Motivations:

  • To be important to someone
    To find a guild

Fears: Needles, spiders (to an extent) and death

[Life]
Occupation: Guildless mage
Family: No living relatives
Medical Conditions: None, Perfectly healthy
Pets: None
Hometown: Nowhere yet.
Secrets: None

History:
Vidrio never knew his parents, having grown up as an orphan in the local orphanage in magnolia. Vidrio grew up hearing stories of powerful mages and epic adventures, never believing he would unlock his own magical potential one day. Vidrio's main dream growing up was trying to find his family, alive or deceased no matter the cost, even if he had to give himself to a demon. That previous idea of his seemed dark and ludicrous at the time, but in retrospect, happened to be the greatest decision of his life. One night, after a long and intense thought session, vidrio was woken by a demon lion, whom he soon learned was the father of perdido. The demon was dying and was looking for someone to look after and raise it's cub, a task vidrio was ecstatic to take up. One last task was then thrust upon vidrio as perdido's father, wanting to help this human boy protect perdido, practically forced vidrio to use take over on him, forcing himself to become a takeover form in a sense. With his magic activated, vidrio raised perdido the way an older brother might raise their younger sibling, from the age of 8 years old. During the five years Vidrio and perdido lived together at the orphanage, they both received insane amounts of prejudice from other children and even adults. Having only each over to rely on Drove the two to become extremely close, closer than vidrio had ever been to another human, leading vidrio to think of himself as a demon and refer to himself as such. Jumping forward 5 years vidrio and perdido sneaked away from the orphanage on a quest to find vidrio's family, all the while perfecting Vidrio's new magic. In their journey across fiore they came across many different things and got into a variety of trouble. Vidrio's first kill occurred during these years, an experience he would love to forget. It happened when the demonic duo came across a lingering dark mage left over from the extermination of the dark guilds. This particular naughty mage had stopped them in a forest clearing outside of magnolia, for one reason or another. Some things were said and a fight had ensued, a fight in which the dark mage had lost his life in, impaled on vidrio's hand. This particular killing had shown vidrio that he was no demon as he hadn't enjoyed the feeling of killing the man. Still vidrio had pushed past this problem and continued on his quest to find his parents. It took the pair until vidrio was 17 to discover the fate of vidrio's parents, Fairy tail mages who had died on a request and their baby never discovered by the guild. This news had saddened the pair until Vidrio had discovered that they hadn't simply abandoned him. With this news obtained the duo took time to train and collect their thoughts, and after 2 years they had decided to continue traveling with the wind. Time passed as perdido grew angrier and angrier. Darker thoughts clouded his mind. Vidrio could see his adoptive brother was changing into something horrible, and he didn't like it one bit. He made the hardest decision of his life one night and sent perdido back to the realm of demons to grow as a demon. This decision almost broke vidrio as a person, but when something has been broken it can only be remade to be stronger. As was the case for vidrio. Separating from perdido solidified vidrio's will, but with it left vidrio with a longing for companionship. Now his adventures were about to enter a new chapter, meeting new friends and foes, and he could only grow stronger... or die, but that would suck.

[Guild & Magic]

Guild: Guildless. might join one in the future.
Guild Tattoo: right pectoral in black with a red outline.

Magic: Takeover: The unwilling
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: Vidrio has the ability to take modified forms of creatures he has taken over. His power is limited to taking over demons though due to the unique, forced nature of his first ever take over. Vidrio's forms are modified in that demons that are four-legged adapt into a more humanoid form when he is using his forms. Demons are usually attuned to dark magic though some have been known to specialize in other elements. His magic also has demons recognize him as a fellow demon and as such allows him to become friends with demons far easier than a normal human would. His magic allows him to use both partial and full take overs
Strengths: (90 words) These forms usually gift vidrio with incredible offensive or defensive boosts, along with elemental attacks to boot. Years of practice with Takeover: the unwilling has allowed him to completely understand the mechanics of the powers of his demons, One of which being that his form boosts his rather poor defensive capabilities without sacrificing his offensive power. As stated before, his magic allows him to connect to demons the same way humans might connect with one another. Like before, this is due to the strange nature of his first take over.
Weaknesses:(128 words) Because of his first take over's very strange nature vidrio has lost the ability to take over anything other than demons completely and he would know, he's tried. It's physically impossible to do it now. He also has to deal with the darker side of all demons he takes over, amplifying his darker emotions. He is able to suppress these emotions outside of battle but in battle he becomes a ruthless monster that stops at nothing to beat an opponent. So far vidrio has been lucky to wrestle control back from the demons long enough to not kill his opponents, only a few would never walk again. He has somewhat control over his demons but it is easy to make him lose control with a well placed taunt. When he has lost control the demon side of him changes combat style. Where vidrio has a more analytical combat approach, his demon fights with a brawler style with no regard to his own health as long as he won't die from an attack. One last weakness is that the element of a demon is easy to determine by appearance alone and so is easy to try and counter from the get go if you can manage to stop being on the defensive.
RP Sample:
"Thats enough for now." Perdido's strong male voice  sounded throughout vidrio's mind as he released his take over form and surveyed the damage done to the landscape from his training session. It shocked him to see how much damage he could do if he went all out and for a moment darker thoughts about murder and robbery entered his thoughts before he forced them out. "damn demons and their inherent evilness" Vidrio grumbled in thought completely forgetting his companions telekinetic ability. "Hey. What about me huh!" The angry voice of perdido sounded again in his mind bringing him back to reality. He hadn't meant to offend his demonic adopted little brother by all means. It had just slipped out. So what now? Did he apologize to perdido? Why had that even made perdido mad anyway? Vidrio sighed at the thought of it, unaware of a certain lion demon's silent snickering as it closed in on him. Closer. Closer. There! Perdido pounced at vidrio sending both of them tumbling down one of the many fresh craters. Both of them laughed as they played in the mud and the burning flames. It was moments like this that made life worth living, vidrio supposed as he and his best friend/brother climbed out and prepared to set off in whatever direction they felt like. Right now, Vidrio truly felt like the freest person in the world, and no-one could take that away from him. "Come on buddy, lets get going" Vidrio called to his companion who simply nodded and walked by his side. Yes, vidrio supposed, They were truly free.  

Face Claim: Menma uzumaki from Naruto

Desired starting level: Level 3


Last edited by talontail26 on Sun Jul 13, 2014 3:50 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Re: Vidrio

Post by Charlotte on Sun Jul 13, 2014 1:11 pm

Okay, i'm gonna list down things you will have to change and take care of.

1. Didn't meet the word count on personality. You have 169 when it should have 200.
2. I'm afraid you cannot have a demon pet. Demons aren't easy to get along with as they are evil creatures and even if you did bring it up as a cub, its demon nature won't let you live in peace. Plus, a pet with an ability is not allowed. You can have a pet that doesn't help you in battles or have any special powers.
3. You didn't meet the word count on your history. You currently has 325 when you actually need 400.
4. I would suggest expanding your history, changing some parts and including some other parts to make it sound more interesting.
5. "He also has to deal with the darker side of all demons he takes over, amplifying his darker emotions. He is able to suppress these emotions outside of battle but in battle he becomes a ruthless monster that stops at nothing to beat an opponent barring death, vidrio would never kill unless completely necessary." Can't help but think you are contradicting yourself here. You say he has to deal with the darker side of his demon which amplifies his darker emotions....So...do you kill your opponents or not?
6. As of now, i can only think of letting you start at level 1. Try improving this app and making it more interesting please.

Bump when you are done.

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Re: Vidrio

Post by Vidrio on Sun Jul 13, 2014 3:51 pm

Have made some changes. see what you think now.

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Re: Vidrio

Post by Charlotte on Thu Jul 17, 2014 11:56 pm

Approved unless an admin says otherwise. And you are approved to start at level 2. I'm making you start at level 2 because your app seems to lack story and not to mention...paragraphs. It doesn't seem like you took much effort in it either. On the positive note though, your app is better than how it was before. ^ - ^

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