Haruto's Starter Spells

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Haruto's Starter Spells

Post by Haruto on Fri Jul 25, 2014 3:50 pm

Dragon Slayer Ability - Eat:
Spell name: Dragon Slayer Ability - Eat Wind
Element: Wind
Rank: 1
MP cost: N/A
Effect: The dragonslayer may eat his element and gain nourishment as if eating regular food. This does not apply to their own spells. In addition, they may eat a spell of their element used on them up to a rank equal to their own. Higher level spells cannot be eaten. Once eaten, they regain MP up to the spell's MP cost at a rate of 10 per post. The ability cannot be used while still regaining MP from another spell. In addition, the character is immune to the effects of their element from any natural source. Higher level spells of their element may still affect the dragon slayer at half of the normal power and cannot be eaten. the character is only effected by their element's ability from spells that are at least two ranks higher.
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Sky Dragon's Roar:
Spell name: Sky Dragon's Roar!
Element: Wind
Rank: 1
MP cost: 10
Effect: A Dragon Slayer's signature technique. The user first inhales and gathers wind magic in their lungs before releasing a large blast of air from their mouth and at their target. The blast is shaped similar to that of a tornado and has a diameter of one meter.

Power: **
Speed: *
Area:
Extra: * (Range)
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Heal:
Spell name: Heal
Element: Wind
Rank: 1
MP cost: 10
Sustain Cost: 5
Effect: By manipulating clean air, the user is able to heal their target, restoring the body internally and externally. This includes easing the patient's body stress and fatigue. The healing can even go as far as draining poison from a victim. Users, unfortunately, can not use this technique on themselves.

Power: *
Speed: **
Area:
Extra: * (Sustained)
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Faster:
Spell name: Faster!
Element: Wind
Rank: 1
MP cost: 10
Sustain Cost: 5
Effect: After snapping their fingers, the user manipulates the air around their body to give them a large boost in speed. The only way for it to be deactivated is by the user ending it themself, or the user is forced into an unconscious state.

Power: *(**)
Speed:
Area:
Extra: * (Sustained) * (Buff) * (Target's Self)
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Sky Dragon's Crushing Fang:
Spell name: Sky Dragon's Crushing Fang
Element: Wind
Rank: 1
MP cost: 10
Effect: The user cloaks the hand of their choice in a small whirlwind. They then strike the target with their fingertips, leaving behind a trail of wind after they do so. This attack ultimately cuts where they hit their opponent.

Power: **
Speed: *
Area:
Extra: * (Range)
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Sky Dragon's Sigh:
Spell name: Sky Dragon's Sigh
Element: Wind
Rank: 1
MP cost: 10
Effect: Upon activating the technique, a hand of the user's choice gains a faint blue hue. They then thrust their arm out in front of themselves, firing a medium sized blast of air towards the target.

Power: *
Speed: **
Area:
Extra: * (Range)


Last edited by Haruto on Tue Jul 29, 2014 3:22 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Re: Haruto's Starter Spells

Post by Maxus on Tue Jul 29, 2014 1:52 pm

These spells are actually fine as is. But there are two things I'm going to point out in case you want to change them now.

In your sustained spells you state nowhere about the constant MP drain to keep them active. Which is fine, but you might want to leave yourself a note in the spell about it. Like MP cost: 10+5. It's not something you have to fix, but would be a good idea to.

You also only have four spells here. The eat ability is a free ability that doesn't take up anything, so you can make a 5th spell. If it's fine as is just bump and lemme know.
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Re: Haruto's Starter Spells

Post by Haruto on Tue Jul 29, 2014 3:24 pm

Thanks for looking over this :D

I edited per what you suggested.

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Re: Haruto's Starter Spells

Post by Maxus on Thu Aug 07, 2014 2:47 pm

Looks good, you can now magic.
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