Anubis Blake Shadow Dragon Slayer Magic.

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Anubis Blake Shadow Dragon Slayer Magic.

Post by Anubis on Sat Jul 26, 2014 3:11 am

Dragon Slayer Ability- Eat Shadow:
Spell name: Dragon Slayer Ability - Eat Shadow
Element: Shadow
Rank: 1
MP cost: N/A
Effect: The dragonslayer may eat his element and gain nourishment as if eating regular food. This does not apply to their own spells. In addition, they may eat a spell of their element used on them up to a rank equal to their own. Higher level spells cannot be eaten. Once eaten, they regain MP up to the spell's MP cost at a rate of 10 per post. The ability cannot be used while still regaining MP from another spell. In addition, the character is immune to the effects of their element from any natural source. Higher level spells of their element may still affect the dragon slayer at half of the normal power and cannot be eaten. the character is only effected by their element's ability from spells that are at least two ranks higher.


Shadow Surf:
Spell name:Shadow Surf.
Element:Shadow
Rank: 1
MP cost:10 with an additional 5 every turn active.
Effect: This ability allows the user to vanish into shadows and use them by traveling along them to transport them a certain distance away. Can be used for escapes or for quick sneak attacks. The user appears to sink or fall into a shadow before vanishing from sight, they then slide along the shadows and slide out a distance away silently. Sustained.

Power:
Speed:***
Area:
Extra:*(Sustained.)


Shadow Dragons Shrouded Flight:
Spell name:Shadow Dragons Shrouded Flight.
Element:Shadow
Rank: 1
MP cost:10 5 every post activated.
Effect:The Dragon Slayers eyes glow a ominous shade as there shrouded by surrounding shadows, there speed is increased tremendously and they became intangible nearly immune to physical attacks, this is one of the signature spells of a Shadow Dragon Slayer and what makes them quite fearsome. When making an attack the users intangibility ends making them vulnerable to attack once more. The User can stay intangible through as many attacks as it
s power before the ability is forced to end, going on a three post cooldown. Furthermore if the power of a spell is greater then the Dragon Slayers own power, they can still potentially take damage, the damage is the power of the fired spell minus the power of the Dragon Shroud.
Power:*(**)(Targets Self)
Speed:
Area:
Extra:***(Buff, Sustained, Targets Self.)


Shadow Dragon Concealed Weapon:
Spell name:Shadow Dragon Concealed Weapon.
Element:Shadow.
Rank: 1
MP cost:10
Effect:From shadows gathered into the users hand a weapon forms, the weapon is basic imbued with Shadow Magic but is only good for one use unless sustained. Sustain Extra.

Power:**
Speed:*
Area:
Extra:*(Sustain)


Shadow Dragon Fist:
Spell name:Shadow Dragon Fist.
Element:Shadow
Rank: 2
MP cost:15
Effect:A sphere of illuminated shadows coats the users fists and with a mighty swing the user slams his fist into the targets. Impact Extra.

Power:****
Speed:
Area:
Extra:*(Impact)


Shadow Dragons Roar:
Spell name:Shadow Dragons Roar
Element:Shadow
Rank: 2
MP cost:15 - 30
Effect:The signature spell of a Dragon Slayer. Inhaling surrounding shadows the user draws in his breath before releasing a massive blast of shadows from his open maw sending it ripping forward like a black tornado of pure shadows. Often times a Dragon Slayers most powerful technique. Overcharged Extra.

Power:**(*)
Speed:**(*)
Area:(*)
Extra:*(Overcharged)


Last edited by Anubis on Thu Aug 07, 2014 3:44 pm; edited 2 times in total
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Re: Anubis Blake Shadow Dragon Slayer Magic.

Post by Maxus on Tue Jul 29, 2014 1:46 pm

Alrighty, a few things wrong here, but nothing severe.

First is the format. I don't mind you stating what extras are used in the effect section, but they need to be listed in the extras along with how many points are used.

Example: Sustained **, Self target *, ect.

For when a stat is buffed with things like defending or self target just do this.

Power: ***(**)

You can lump them all into one, or make seperate for each extra.

It's just easier to read and reference that way. Now for the spells.

Shadow surf: This one's fine once the format is fixed.

Shadow Dragon's Shrouded Flight: The only thing I would add in here is that if the power of target's tangible spell is greater, you'll be effected by it but at -3 power. So if they had 4 power, you'd be hit for 1. Also, I'd say the power is the number of attacks you can "dodge". So after 3 attacks, the spell would be disabled and on cooldown.

Concealed weapon: Looks fine.

Shadow Dragon's Fist: Also Looks fine.

Shadow Dragon's Roar: Liking the Overcharged idea. However, you also get a point in Area when you use overcharge.

In short, patch up a couple of the spells, fix the format, and these would be good to go.
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Re: Anubis Blake Shadow Dragon Slayer Magic.

Post by Anubis on Tue Jul 29, 2014 3:04 pm

Fixed, thank ya kindly o:

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Re: Anubis Blake Shadow Dragon Slayer Magic.

Post by Maxus on Thu Aug 07, 2014 2:46 pm

You didn't put the points by the listed extras, so I have no way of knowing how many you spent on each extra. I know it's kind of nitpicky, but once you fix that it should be good.
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Re: Anubis Blake Shadow Dragon Slayer Magic.

Post by Anubis on Thu Aug 07, 2014 3:44 pm

Mmk, edited.

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Re: Anubis Blake Shadow Dragon Slayer Magic.

Post by Maxus on Thu Aug 07, 2014 11:48 pm

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