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Haruto's Starter Spells

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Post by Haruto Fri Jul 25, 2014 3:50 pm

Dragon Slayer Ability - Eat:
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Sky Dragon's Roar:
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Heal:
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Faster:
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Sky Dragon's Crushing Fang:
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Sky Dragon's Sigh:


Last edited by Haruto on Tue Jul 29, 2014 3:22 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Post by Maxus Tue Jul 29, 2014 1:52 pm

These spells are actually fine as is. But there are two things I'm going to point out in case you want to change them now.

In your sustained spells you state nowhere about the constant MP drain to keep them active. Which is fine, but you might want to leave yourself a note in the spell about it. Like MP cost: 10+5. It's not something you have to fix, but would be a good idea to.

You also only have four spells here. The eat ability is a free ability that doesn't take up anything, so you can make a 5th spell. If it's fine as is just bump and lemme know.
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Post by Haruto Tue Jul 29, 2014 3:24 pm

Thanks for looking over this :D

I edited per what you suggested.
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Post by Maxus Thu Aug 07, 2014 2:47 pm

Looks good, you can now magic.
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