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Post by Guest Thu Sep 19, 2013 2:29 am

Light Dragon's Roar:

Light Bombardment:

Light Dragon's Claws:

Radiant Light:

Light Speed:

Dragon Slayer Ability:


Last edited by Lillian Daigo on Thu Sep 19, 2013 10:34 am; edited 2 times in total

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Post by PatriotArrow Thu Sep 19, 2013 9:25 am

These spells all look very good, though I believe you're missing a point in each of your rank 1 spells.

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Post by Guest Thu Sep 19, 2013 10:03 am

bumped

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Post by PatriotArrow Thu Sep 19, 2013 10:20 am

*sighs at self* I probably shouldn't have looked at that less than an hour after I woke up, but everything still looks good, save that the wording on your claws are a little off. I'm not sure if you meant bone or what, but... I mean I'm no doctor, but I think if the claws cut several inches they're probably going to hit muscle. ^^

You can edit that whichever direction suits your character. Bump again when edited, then we're good.
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