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Hikari Hioru

Post by Hikari Hioru on Sat Oct 25, 2014 12:59 pm

Hikari Hioru

Hikari Hioru:



[Attributes]
Power☆☆☆☆
Agility☆☆☆☆☆
Toughness
Intelligence
Willpower☆☆☆☆

[Basic Information]
Full Name: Hikari Hioru
Alias(es): Ruby
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Birthday: September 24th
Sexuality: Bisexual [why not lolz]

[Characteristics]
Height: 5'4"
Weight: 115 lbs
Hair: Black dyed with Ruby Red Streaks
Eyes: Ruby Red

General Appearance: Hikari Hioru is usually seeing wearing her normal White Combat Dress with Red Trimmings though she does often switch it up with a Black Dress with Red Trimmings from time to time. Often wearing high socks, colored black and often wearing small heeled shoes colored Red and Black. Hikari stands at about the average height of a 17 year old girl, she is slightly physically built due to running around and physically conditioning herself in order to use her spells, her hair is a beautiful pitch black that shines in the sunlight and mixed with a Ruby Red hair dye, just seems make Hikari seem more beautiful.

Personality: You can say that Hikari is actually a very sadistic individual when she's around somebody she seems to lust for, whether alone or with a group of people she will not hesitate to actually bluntly say her feelings towards a specific individual; whether Hikari doesn't like that on the spot or openly wants to be around them as often as possible. There is a slight difference however when Hikari is alone with somebody she likes, enemy or friend, and that is usually acting very clingy towards that person and essentially tries to gain their attention because of how lonely she feels inside.

Aside from the entire flirtatious sadistic personality, Hikari actually is a very nice person when around the people she cares about, however she doesn't actually open up to many others simply due to the fact of her sadistic personality can conflict with what she deeply wants: A lasting lover who understands her past and is willing to actually be there for her no matter what. A lasting fighter, Hikari is very hard-headed when it comes to fighting alone and groups tending not to listen very well to thought out plans, though when Hikari makes her own plans they miraculously work out to favor her and her comrades.



Likes:

    Spoiler:

  • Crystals [Ruby's in Specific]
  • Teasing other individuals sexually
  • Drawing

Dislikes: 

    Spoiler:

  • Being treated bad
  • Breaking precious objects
  • Being forced to do things she dislikes

Motivations: 

    Spoiler:

  • Vengeance
  • Love/Compassion

Fears: 

    Spoiler:

  • Being Judged by her actions
  • Letting everybody down


[Life]
Occupation: Guild Mage

Family: Deceased Mother and Father

Medical Conditions: N/A, though it is rumored among those in Hikari's hometown that she is a Psychopath.

Pets: None
Hometown: Crocus
Secrets:


  • Fear of Spiders
  • Fear of the Dark



History:

It could be that Hikari's parents are the reason for her joining the Guild known as Shadow Heart. Born of Good Parents and good will, Hikari was raised to be a good girl with decent morals, was taught to defend herself and others even if it meant getting in harms way. This was because her parents were once Guild Mages who have retired recently after being married and bearing Hikari just a few days after. However, her mother did want Hikari to start training to be a Guild Mage at an early age, and thus began teaching her the Caster type Magic of Making. Of course, Hikari's mother utilized the Ice-Make, and her father utilized Ice-Making as well, but Hikari wanted to be different and decided to utilize the Crystal Making end of Molder Magic. Though it did take some harsh training to learn the essential basics and conditioning to utilize it, Hikari was able to finally grasp the usage of Crystal Make and ended up making Crystals in the form of Ruby's, Sapphires, and Emeralds. The lustrous beauty of the Crystal being made almost had her parents drop their jaws in awe.

That goes without saying however, it wasn't long till some rouge mage bandits came inside Hikari's home and randomly began throwing the entire house inside out, supposedly because there was to be some girl who could create Crystal and essentially sell her magic for money, though it was only a rumor to them. Hikari's parents being Ice-Make Mages and actually placing back in their days in B to A-Rank Mages were able to fend off one of the bandits yet the other however, landed a sneak attack on the father and killed him, the mother suffered some grave injuries and was forced into the Hospital while Hikari was left to fend alone for herself. While HIkari's mother was in the Hospital, Hikari was trying to make ends meet with little jobs and always visited her mother in the Hospital. It wasn't long until the damage that was dealt to Hikari's mother happened to hit one of her vitals and the doctors wouldn't do anything about it because of the risk towards her magic reserves. Hikari's mother died 

Once Hikari reached the age of 17, she decided to travel out of Magnolia simply because it was no longer safe within the city boundaries. The Magic Council had been doing their shenanigans, Fairy Tail wasn't as powerful as it once was back before the war had started. It just didn't make sense to Hikari as to how one of the most powerful guilds who fought for the good of others were simply losing their touch; everything that happened to Hikari during her life began to mold within the mind and suddenly, something cracked. As if Hikari's mind had just lost all sanity inside and is in need of somebody to essentially...make it all better. Once Hikari had reached Crocus after about two weeks of traveling on foot, she stumbled upon a guild that essentially nurtured chaos and power: Shadow Heart. Somehow Hikari felt right at home in that guild with her Broken Mind, and had decided to join the guild that let HIkari be herself around others. Though a guild of darkness, apparently even people of good heart are in the darker side, and Hikari just managed to get lucky enough to bump into some in the Shadow Heart guild.

[Guild & Magic]
Guild: Shadow Heart

Guild Tattoo: Top of the Right Upper-Forearm, colored Amethyst Purple

Magic: Crystal Make
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: Crystal Make is a Caster Type Molder Magic that utilizes Crystals rather and a specific element. The user can create a variety of objects out of Crystal to be used for offensive, defensive or miscellaneous purposes. Outside of combat, the user can also change their surroundings using Crystal, such as covering the ground with Crystal. The Crystal also can be used as wound dressing, staunching bleeding and preventing the swelling of an injury. In Hikari's case, the Crystals take form of Ruby's, Sapphires, and Emeralds which essentially give off a majestic appeal to her beauty but rather is the form she decided to shape the Crystal Molding Magic.

As of now, Hikari only focuses on the Static aspect of Crystal Making, meaning that she can create inanimate objects at will, including weapons and affecting the environment around herself.

Strengths: Crystal Make is thankfully resistant to Fire and Ice type Magic Attacks and is capable of essentially breaking many things with practical ease but the degree of the magic's strength solely rests on the users mental and physical capacity to use this magic effectively. Being a versatile type of Molder Magic can make Hikari a formidable opponent as it can fit most situations in combat and prove to be an asset in miscellaneous and combat manners.

Weaknesses: While Crystal make is a formidable Molding Caster Magic, one must understand that even though it is much more resilient against other Elemental Magic attacks such as Fire and Ice, it can break if there is too much pressure being applied to it while attempting to absorb an attack. Imagination is a must to fully utilize this Magic to its fullest extents, and one must understand that Crystal Make is only oh-so durable in physical combat and is usually better suited for Mid to Long Range Combat, because that is where it most excels at.


RP Sample:

"Alright, I'm ready....." Zenith thought to himself as he prepared to take the Entrance Exam for Syne Academy in the form of Atlas Tradition. Around Zenith's presence, was an almost empty room filled with only mechanical lockers. Just after Zenith had taken out his gauntlets from the assigned locker and mounted them on his wrist, an alarm started to echo throughout the room. The lockers had each begun to slowly dip into the floor with a rhythm that seemed to give the mechanical clicking a soothing melody fitting to the echoing of the alarm.

Zenith then simply rose from the lone chair that he was sitting on in the room, more sounds then clicked off during the echoing of the alarm, the first was a lighter one being the chair dipping into the floor. Another which was much heavier symbolized that the platform Zenith was standing upon had begun to rise up into a bright light, the room that would be Zenith;s Entrance Exam. In response to this, Zenith had let his gauntlets activate and take form around his entire forearm as the platform was rising up. The serene and relaxing moments before the Entrance Exam were about to be replaced by a violent ordeal that would determine whether or not Zenith is admitted into Syne Academy.

"For my family." Zenith immediately said to himself in a cold tone, as the platform had finally reached it's destination; Zenith was able to see a crowd of people towards the upper half of the large and spacious room, people who had already taken the test and are awaiting their results, while at the same time there are others who are awaiting their turn in the Entrance Exam. However, one thing was in common between all of these people: that was that they were all gauging out their competition, namely the rumors of Zenith Oreol had sprung all the way to even the Entrance Exam itself. Now taking one brief scan around the room, Zenith takes note of the Monitors on all four sides of the room, in order to allow people to view his combat prowess and Entrance Exam, at least for those who were not able to see the room clearly. 

Doors from all four wings of the gran, white lit room had opened up and a swarm of Humanoid Robots flooded out into the room from the forsaken doors, and all were programmed to kill their target on sight. "Now the fun begins." Zenith stated with a firm and icy voice, many shadows have appeared in the premises, though he had decided that for mean time it was not necessary to do something extremely dangerous and stupid at the given time. Zenith then heard the sounds of lasers being fired from the East Wing towards him. *Whirr-click* Zenith's gauntlet had engaged a shield that was designed specifically to reflect any projectile that happened to be laser, light or dust related straight back towards the enemy at twice or three times the intended carnage. *Boom-clank* the swarm of Robots on the East Wing had all be decimated, *Buurr-thud* the East Wing Door had slammed shut. 


Murmuring could now be portrayed as Zenith had briefly scanned the premises and had pulled the trigger on his gauntlet [triggered by his aura] to launch a ray of white hot, piercing light towards the West Wing of the swarm almost instantly after he had decimated the entire East Wing. While making the chain explosions destroy the entire West Wing was viable, the North and South Wings of the room were intact and quickly closing in on Zenith.

"Tch, well things are gonna get messy from here on out..." Zenith whispered under his breath as he flicked his shield mounted gauntlet to allow a White Ray of Light to envelop his weapon in order to allow it to act as a sort of buzz saw to slice up some of the danger in the premises. *Grrr* the low growl of Zenith's Jaguar Genes had show itself as he began rushing towards the North Wing that was closing in with the South Wing at an intense speed only Jaguar's could actually run at. The moment Zenith had arrived there, he swung his right arm while spinning a full 360 Degrees Clockwise to allow the buzz saw-like light to extend and shoot out violently towards both the North and South Wings, in which all but two Humanoid Robots from each side had unfortunate encounter with as they were sliced in half and exploded in the process. The remaining four Humanoid Robots had begun charging towards Zenith as a smirk had appeared on his face, "It's showtime!" Zenith said happily, though with a kind of maniacal type of voice while his Aura showing had changed from Snow White to a Pitch Black mixed with Bloody Red, signifying that the most dangerous part of Zenith has yet to be shown.

Zenith immediately triggered his shield mounted gauntlet and pointed it up towards the one giant light bulb above them all. Firing away at the light bulb, expressions of disbelief could be seen on the faces of the people watching, and especially to the ones who had already taken their exam. *Snicker-Cackle* the laughing of Zenith could be heard as the Bloody Red mix of the Aura was the only visible thing, then all of a sudden, clashes of lightning and fists were resonating around the room, *Buzz, thud, clank* the battle sounds were intense, to the point of where the four red eyes of the Humanoid Robots and the Bloody Red Aura of Zenith Oreol were moving so fast it was almost a blur.

Zenith decided to finally use the shadows to his advantage, namely...the entire dark room and what could be seen were legitimate pitch black platforms rising up from within the darkness from behind and under the Robots, throwing them off balance and allowing Zenith to utilize the white light buzz saw launchign strategy on two of them which for just a brief second; the crowd was able to see the decimation of two more Humanoid Robots in hand to hand combat. When the light had dissipated once more, sparks of electricity followed immediately where Zenith had delivered a devastating blow to the final two heads of the Humanoid Robots secretly and with such speed, it were as if Zenith had traveled through the shadows to ambush them and disappeared back into them.

When all was said and done, Zenith shined his White Light on the shield mounted gauntlet and let it revert back into a regular gauntlet form on his forearm. "Ummm, do you guys have Emergency Lights? I need to find an exit to relax now." Zenith said jokingly though with a tone so serious, people couldn't tell what kind of power this..."monster" had stored within himself to do all of this without being touched, literally. The emergency lights were lit on and the first thing everybody saw was Zenith standing the center of the room with all of the pieces of exploded and sliced up Humanoid Robots. A door opened up South of Zenith, and he calmly walked towards that direction to make his way into the crowd to find a lone chair for him to sit on, and relax for the rest of the day.


Username: Hikari Hioru
Face Claim: Akame [Akame ga Kill!]

Theme Song:
No Pain, No Game [Theme Song]


Last edited by Takashi Hioru on Wed Oct 29, 2014 10:21 am; edited 4 times in total
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Re: Hikari Hioru

Post by Maxus on Mon Oct 27, 2014 4:43 pm

So, this app as it currently stands is unapprovable.

First, age. The site takes place 2 years after the war. Technically 3 given how the overall site Timeline has gone. She would be born right about now if she was born a few years after the war.

Second, in your personality. When roleplaying this character bear two things in mind. This IS a PG13 site. And not everyone is going to bend over backwards for you if you use a little cleavage. If you want anything more explicit you'll have to take it to PM, or other private channels.

The next, and biggest issue, is your history.

Setting aside the aforementioned age thing, it's okay up until the bandits show up. You have several holes and nothing that really ties your app together.

How did the bandits kill not one but TWO ice make mages that had presumably met working for a guild?

Why do the bandits suddenly grow a conscious and leave her alive?

Why does she decide to hate Fairy Tail despite the bandits apparently specifying they only used to work for that guild?

And how does any of this turn your character from sweet, innocent Sunday school girl into dominatrix?

As a side note, your magic's fine.

Bump when you've edited.
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Re: Hikari Hioru

Post by Hikari Hioru on Tue Oct 28, 2014 2:21 pm

Bump please
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Re: Hikari Hioru

Post by Maxus on Wed Oct 29, 2014 12:32 am

Your history makes much more sense now, though it could still use work. It is, however, passable as is currently...

Except for this major, glaring issue you failed to fix the first time.

Spoiler:
Full Name: Hikari Hioru
Alias(es): Ruby
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Birthday: September 24th
Sexuality: Bisexual

But as the FIRST SENTENCE in your history you have

Spoiler:
Hikari was born in Magnolia a few years after the war was over.

This site takes place A FEW YEARS AFTER the war. So you're literally less than a year old. And somehow think you're 17. Fix.

Also, you don't need the PG13 disclaimers. I was telling you what staff would be looking out for in your threads.
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Re: Hikari Hioru

Post by Nero Yamazaki on Wed Oct 29, 2014 9:52 am

Okay then I'll jist get rid of the few years after or something, maybe just put put like idj, years in general after the war. and i'll take off the disclaimers, I took off the sexuak attitude of Hikari regardless so i guess it should be fine now lol. will fix when I get to a computer at the library
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Re: Hikari Hioru

Post by Maxus on Thu Oct 30, 2014 10:21 am

Alrighty you look good to go.
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