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Travis Moon

Post by Travis Moon on Mon Oct 27, 2014 9:27 pm

Travis Moon


Attributes

Power - **
Agility - ***
Toughness - ***
Intelligence - ****
Willpower -***

Basic Information

Full Name:Travis Moon
Alias(es):
Gender :male
Age :17
Birthday :March 15
Sexuality :Bi

Characteristics

Height :6' 1"
Weight :115 lbs.
Hair :white
Eyes :Ocean blue

General Appearance

Travis is a tall 17 year old male with sharp ocean blue eyes and short white colored hair that he likes to spike. He has slightly pale skin and broad shoulders.travis has a slim body with a average build. He prefers wearing dark shades of colors and short sleeved shirts with pants or a jacket if it's cold out. Travis usually sleeps in dark blue boxers in the summer and black,white, and gray plaid long pajama pants during the winter with a v-neck under shirt.

In formal events Travis wears slacks with a short sleeved dress shirt and trench coat. In the winter he wears a jacket with short sleeved v-neck and pants.

Personality

Travis is a person who is passionate about anything creative or artistic. He is sensitive by nature and is cautious and conservative. Travis is very helpful and understanding of the needs of others.  He is a major book worm since he could read. Travis is gentle and protective of his friends but to his enemies he mocks and taunts them while observing them to find their weakness or a pattern of attack.

He is very cunning and strategic and uses the versatile advantages his magic gives him to his advantage. Travis is a very loyal and empathetic person who loves those he considers friends or family and looks at his celestial spirits as a second family to him along with his guild. He has a great fear of being abandoned or left alone because of his dad leaving his mom when he was 5 because she was a Mage and kept that from him because he hated magic users and smacked a crying Travis while calling him a freak as he kicked them out of the house.

After that he slowly got a case of depression which didn't surprise his mother because it ran in their family. Travis acts coldly to people who treat celestial spirits like their beneath them and will gladly voice his opinion. He also dislikes people who act high and mighty who think their better than everybody else. Travis loves to help people who are in need even if it is something small and won't ask for anything in return unless its a celestial gate key. He also is a smart ass at times when he is annoyed or someone asks a dum question where the answer is obvious.

Likes :

Coffee -His mothers mistake was giving him a taste of coffee at the age of 6 since he instantly become a coffee addict to where when you take his coffee he'd bite you.

Swimming - Travis loves to swim and usually would be either found reading or swimming in a lake.

Reading-Travis has loved to read ever since he could read and his preferred genre is fantasy.

Star Gazing- He loves to see the stars at night and usually ends up falling asleep.

Dislikes :

Judgmental parents- Travis dislikes parents who shun or hurt their children because of something they cannot control.

Not getting his morning coffee - Travis hates it when he doesn't get his morning coffee since it helps wake him up for the day.

Arrogant people - He dislikes people that are arrogant because their attitude annoys him.

Being truly alone - hates being isolated and not having his keys whip the him because that means he is truly alone and his thoughts will go dark and depressive.

Motivations :

He wants to learn and become wise and powerful enough so one day when he is older he can create his own guild.

Travis wants to help people that can't defend theme selves and protect those he cherishes.


Fears :

Losing his keys -To him its like losing a best friend and makes him powerless.

Being abandoned -Travis fears that he might be abandoned or betrayed which his why he is so hard on himself.


Life

Occupation :Guild Mage
Family :unnamed mother, unnamed grandma(deceased), and unnamed father(Unknown)
Medical Conditions :slight case of depression
Pets :no
Hometown :Hargeon Town
Secrets :
His depression : Travis doesn't tell anybody about it because he is afraid he will be judged and he doesn't look depressed but thinks depressing things.

History:

Travis had a Mage for a mother and his father didn't have any magical power and had hated magic users so his mom kept her magic a secret. His mom kept it a secret for five whole years before he found out when he spied on her using her magic to defend herself from bandits. His father threw both Travis and his mom out but not before beating Travis and trashing the stuff his mom owned, but got a smack to the head  from his mom with a frying pan when he touched her baby.Travis mom moved back to his mothers hometown Hargeon town and decided to live with his grandma whom had gladly taken the two In.

During his childhood he would be reading books,swimming, star gazing with his grandma, and learning about celestial spirit magic from his grandma who was a celestial spirit Wizard. He would hang out in the cafe his mom worked at and helped with serving customers coffee which he had a knack for making. Travis had inherited his grandmas silver gate key after her death as she was one of the casualties of the attack on the magic counsel in era.

Devastated by her death Travis decided to learn celestial spirit magic since he felt that it resonated with him and to honor his grandma. By inheriting his grandmas silver key to the starry muse Urania, Travis become Urania's owner and asked for her to become his sensei and teach him about celestial spirit magic. Urania agreed to this as she taught him about the difference between silver and gold keys, the kinds of spirits there are and that they could be used for many things other than fighting such as healing, defend, gaining knowledge, and even a pet for company if the person got lonely.

After the war was over and the guilds were going back to normal, Travis decided to travel around a bit and find a guild to join. With a teary goodbye from his mom, Travis set forth on his journey at the age of 16 and for a year traveled around fiore doing odd jobs here and there while reading about the major guilds in fiore to see what they were like. Finally he had found the guild that gave him a feeling of warmth and made a spark in his heart that felt like home; Lamia Scale and decided on joining the guild.

Guild & Magic

Guild:Lamia Scale
Guild Tattoo:On his right shoulder in dark blue
Magic:Celestial Spirit Magic
Caster or Holder:Holder
Description: Celestial Spirit Magic is a Magic in which the user summons Celestial Spirits by opening their gates through the use of Celestial Spirit Gate Keys.

These Keys are separated into two classes: the more common Silver Keys and the rarer Gold Keys.Keys for Celestial Spirits are counted in Units (collectively without regard of Gold or Silver),and a Celestial Spirit Mage is noted by how many Units they have obtained.

Strengths:

The strengths of this magic is that it's versatile since some spirits can be used for combat, entertainment, information, and even a cute little pet. And the Mage only uses their magic to summon the spirit and the spells casted by the spirits don't drain the summoner since it's not their spells but their spirits spell being casted. Another strength of this magic is that rare keys such as the gold keys are the only one in the world and is unique unlike silver keys who are sold in stores and that are generic such as there being numerous keys of the Canis Minor Nikori.


Weaknesses:

The weakness is that if his keys are taken he can't use his magic. Another thing that can be a problem is that some contracts made with celestial spirits limit them to certain days they can be summoned since I bet they do have lives to live in the celestial spirit world.

And the major weakness to this magic is the magic doll play which can turn his celestial spirits against him. Also another disadvantage is that some celestial spirits can only be summoned through special condition such as Aquarius who has to be summoned with water.

RP Sample:

It was a silent night where the sky was clear to let the many stars amongst it shine and twinkle. Travis laid back against the bark of an old cherry blossom tree as he watched the stars shine in the night sky. Grabbing a silver key from his pocket that had a scroll design on the handle and held it up.

"Open gate of the Starry muse Urania," Travis chanted as ding dong sound was made and a woman appeared from the magic circle. The women had the appearance of a 25 year old women with golden blonde hair braided into a French braid with a black colored greek styled dress with star designs on them while holding a staff with a globe on top of it.

"Hey Urania can you help me find the quickest way to get to Hargeon Town? Travis asked a smile forming on his face at seeing  his beloved celestial spirit.
"Of course , Urania told Travis with a mysterious voice as she smiled as she looked to the stars to find the easier way to travel.

"Urania when did you meet my grandma?" Asked Travis curious of how Urania met his late grandma.

"Well Travis I met your grandma when she was 17 years old after she made a contract with me when she bought my key from a shop. I remember your grandma calling me her starry guide. Your grandma had me help her on escort missions to find the path which holds the least danger And after that we become great friends and I helped her while she had your mother by going through the gate on my own power to help her through giving birth to your mom Urania explained remembering her former masters first mission which was escorting a small caravan and the joy her master felt after having her daughter.

"Wow you've been with my grandma for a long time haven't you," Travis replied getting up while patting off anything on his pants as he followed Urania as she led the way to the easiest path to get to Hargeon town without meeting  any unnecessary obstacles upon the way.

"Yep for 53 years I was contracted to your grandma and now to you whom I will always be there to help," Urania replied with a smile on her face remembering all the memories she had with his grandma and now the promise of helping her grandson anyway she can.

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Face Claim:Zero Kiryu(Vampire Knight)


Last edited by Hoshi on Tue Oct 28, 2014 7:55 pm; edited 2 times in total

Travis Moon

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Primary Magic : celestial spirit magic
Secondary Magic : N/A
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Re: Travis Moon

Post by Tatsuma on Tue Oct 28, 2014 11:30 am

As it is now I can't approve this application the reasons for this are cited below.

1.) It's very difficult to read as it is so we would appreciate it if you would space out your sections and paragraphs. For examples you might look at how other people's apps are spread out.

2.) We don't allow precognition here in any form. It gets abused just about every time and we'd rather not risk it.

3.) your word count for your strengths on your magic is below the 75 minimum so you'll need to fix that.

4.) Please un-bold everything since it's unnecessary and bunches everything up.

5.) No your keys do not get stronger with you as you rank up. Keys have a standard strength, for those to increase you would need to get stronger keys, but they mana they use is still there's. Stronger keys have more mana and more powerful abilities but the keys themselves don't level up.

Once the changes are made bump for completion and I'll be happy to give it a second look

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Re: Travis Moon

Post by Travis Moon on Tue Oct 28, 2014 2:15 pm

Bump?

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Re: Travis Moon

Post by Tatsuma on Tue Oct 28, 2014 2:26 pm

improvements made, but still missing some critical components.

1.) Your strengths section is still short on the word count required for it (which is 75 words)

2.) Again no, your keys do not get more powerful with you as you rank up. You will need to procure stronger keys in order for you to have stronger keys. Bump when edits are made

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Re: Travis Moon

Post by Travis Moon on Tue Oct 28, 2014 8:45 pm

Bump

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Re: Travis Moon

Post by Tatsuma on Wed Oct 29, 2014 9:03 pm

Alright it looks good. You're approved for rank D welcome to FTR! Be advised, your name will be changed to match your account so that you're aware of this change. Your account name is now "Travis Moon"

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