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Post by Arata Takagi Tue Jan 14, 2014 12:25 am

Arata Takagi

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[Attributes]
Power- **
Agility- ****
Toughness- ***
Intelligence- ****
Willpower- **

[Basic Information]
Full Name: Arata Takagi
Alias(es): N/A
Gender: Male
Age: 26
Birthday: Dec 14
Sexuality: Homosexual

[Characteristics]
Height:5’7
Weight: 158
Hair: Black
Eyes: Gray

General Appearance: Arata’s hair is usually worn in a fashion that is layered and messy; though brushed, he doesn’t take the time to style or fix his hair if it moves out of place. The only time he would do so is if it grew uncomfortable. The mage has slate grey eyes of an almond shape, which are frequently outlined by dark circles from restlessness. He is lithe for his age and gender, but as a mage he makes sure to keep his body at a muscular level that would allow him to deal attacks after his opponent is properly weakened. As for clothing, Arata can be found dressed in monochrome colours; however, he favours the color white. He always wears thin-rimmed glasses. Despite having a colour preference in clothes, Arata’s clothes are oftentimes wrinkled or haphazardly buttoned. They are clean, but with the appearance of “eh, it was the closest thing!”

Personality: Prudish and prideful. Arata usually isn’t one to initiate conversation, but he speaks quite a bit once he starts. He refuses to openly speak about relationships or dating- much less anything more. He is a procrastinator, lazy, but intelligent in his own way. He may be described as one who dresses sloppily and appears altogether uninterested- not being one to fake happiness or excitement for a friend or situation. This makes him easy to read, for he blatantly expresses his emotions (when they are strong enough to force him to act). Arata Takagi can be called a narcissist. He (more often than not) cares for no one save for himself, and is (in a way) a bigot. The young mage has trouble admitting when he is wrong and giving in.

Takagi is easily addicted to new things, like drawing or a particular drink, and expresses ignorance of these acts when confronted (he denies it’s a problem). As one who likes to try new things, Arata enjoys practicing his magic and using it in new ways. With a tendency to be apathetic, he cares not for whom he hurts or whether he appears rude. At first glance he is a normal person- perhaps even mistaken for a mere bookkeeper rather than a mage. There are faults to this assumption: he is a mage, and is disorganised- making a terrible bookkeeper.

In a fight Arata is usually quite clear-headed, but is easily clouded when his fears come into play. Just as well, he is easily angered when pushed the “right” way, and has a tendency to be reckless and violent at this time.

Likes:
-New things; this includes foods, drinks, books, fighting techniques- anything that manages to catch his attention.
-Assorted cheeses; he once indulged in nearly a pound of these assorted dishes, and quickly found that mozzarella was the most enticing.  
-Monochrome colours; just a preference. White and black are his favourite, yet other hues are welcome on a whim. Thus, Arata typically dresses in this fashion.

Dislikes:
-Hyper people; they’re loud, usually obnoxious, and it reminds him very much of quarrelling children.
-People who nag; honestly, who likes a nag? They irritate him, just as well reminding him of a child.
-Being wrong; for an unknown reason, finding that he is wrong gives him goosebumps and, in more extreme cases, terrible anxiety. Finding that he is wrong is almost always accompanied with a desire to run or refute this claim.

Motivations:
-Finding new things/trinkets; they’re just interesting, and occasionally fill him with a sense of pride when someone notices his collection.
-He just enjoys living. The little things are pleasing (a blue sky or warm blanket)

Fears:
-Being wrong
-Seeing his own blood for too long (as in: concentrating on it instead of battle)
-Thunder Storms

[Life]
Occupation: Mage for hire.
Family: Mei Takagi (mother), and Clyde Takagi (father). Clarice, older sister by three years. His husband is Darion Takagi.
Medical Conditions:N/A
Pets: N/A
Hometown: Clover Town (East Fiore)
Secrets: He enjoys pain. Mostly emotional, but physical is alright- to a point. Arata derives a mixture of anxiety and comfort from pricking his fingers with needles, then watching the blood roll from the tip of them. When the anxiety gets to be too much, he hastily rinses/cleanses away the vital fluid. Ice, the cold in general, is a turn-on for him.

History:

[Guild & Magic]

Guild: Guildless
Guild Tattoo: Inner wrist, left.

Magic: Toxin Magic
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: The user is trained in the art of using toxins as a means to fight, by both producing and manipulating the substance. The attacks are given a tangible appearance that is able to infect enemies; different attacks at separate levels inflicting a variety of effects. The toxins infect a target in a list of ways, since the magic wielders are just as varying. For example: some toxins must be inhaled, as others may have to directly permeate a wound. Most toxins cause the enemy to experience repercussions, such as a slowed pace or disorientation. This, again, depends entirely upon the attack, its level of strength, and the mage wielding it.

Strengths: Toxin Magic mages are adept in concocting and devising new ways to use their magic. An advantage they have is being both long and short-range fighters. Since their magic is meant to inhibit the capabilities of others, these mages must train in other areas (intelligence, strength) in order to deliver a final blow. Also, if they wish, it is not difficult to attack while hidden. A mist of toxin would be an obvious attack to make, but more than simple to preform. It would give them an advantage. Following the description written, Toxin Magic causes repercussions for an opponent which could give great advantage to the Toxin wielder. On another note, certain toxins are more potent at different temperatures.

Weaknesses: When a Toxin Magic user practices new techniques, it is not uncommon for them to become sick or ill. This is the result of particles of their magic infecting them. These magic users must be cautious, for a slip-up can land them bedridden, limbless, blind, or otherwise impaired. These wielders are not immune to their own magic, hence the cautiousness. If they try a spell much too powerful at their current level, they risk being poisoned or other such consequences. Concluding this, Toxin users must be cautious when trying new techniques, and be mindful of the magic’s distance from themselves. Just as they may be more potent at certain temperatures, they risk being ineffective the further they are from that degree.

RP Sample:

Face Claim: I actually have no idea. Searching by images on google didn’t work, and when I tried to find the artist’s name on the page I extracted it from I could not find it.

Desired starting level: 2


Last edited by Arata Takagi on Sat Jan 18, 2014 12:25 am; edited 5 times in total
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Posts : 2
Experience : 0
Secondary Magic : N/A

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Post by Guest Fri Jan 17, 2014 1:03 am

Hello Arata, welcome to the site. I would love nothing more than to grade your app right now, so lets get started shall we.

I shall take this like any other app, as I read it I am gonna write my thoughts per each section. If there needs to be any thoughts given.

Appearance: You just barely made the word count here. I would personally like to see more effort put into it. Be more descriptive, especially if you want to start out at something besides level 1.

Personality: Same as the appearance. I know words can be sometimes hard to gather up, especially on character apps, but come up with something. Be detailed. If your character has a love for music, or thinks they can sing good, or if bats just drive them batty.. hehe... All of this encompasses ones personality. (by the way it is disorganized, not disorganised)

Regarding your likes, dislikes, motivations, and fears...
While you have the required number, descriptions or explanations are nice, for they allow me to see more about your character. Things like this are the key to starting off at a higher rank.

Hometown: This kinda needs to be filled out, and not the question that is on the app. Just saying. (I think you accidentally placed it inside the history spoiler.)

History: All around a decent history. I would have liked to see a bit more possibly worked in about what the character was doing during the war and such, but as is, it works. More description naturally would be nice, but then I like details.

Magic: And now it is time for the part I have been waiting for..... the magic. I find this to be the most fun thing to check and approve on each app. Your magic, sadly has a few, tensy wensy problems we must address. First off you state this magic, which deals with toxins, is a holder magic. Yet I do not see how this would fit our holder system. You use actual plants and objects, and it pertains nothing to do with lacrima, so as of current our site could not handle this magic. Also it is a poison based magic, which while allowed, have to be quite the carefully approached of the magics. I can help with that if you desperately want a poison based magic. Though I am sad to say you must rethink your magic idea as a whole, let me know if you need help

RP Sample:  You are sadly 20 words short of the minimum for the RP sample. Please fix this. We want to be sure everyone is always doing at least 200 words a post. This is why we asked for the 200 words here.



All in all a decent app. Make some changes, give me a shout in the CB if you need help, for I am more than happy to.

Bump when edits are made~

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Post by Arata Takagi Sat Jan 18, 2014 12:11 am

Bumpity bump~
Arata Takagi
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Posts : 2
Experience : 0
Secondary Magic : N/A

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Post by Guest Sat Jan 18, 2014 12:51 am

Well, at least to me everything seems fairly okay now. For all intensive purposes, you are approved. Fair warning though, your spells will be closely monitored as to see how poison magic will play out. You are the first to try it, and well not to many places allow it, but we are going to see how it goes here. Just remember the limitations you placed on your magic when you make spells, and you should be fine though.

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