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Lucy Lionheart

Post by Lucy Lionheart on Mon Apr 28, 2014 9:28 pm

Lucy Lionheart


[Attributes]
Power - **
Agility - ***
Toughness - ****
Intelligence - **
Willpower -****

[Basic Information]
Full Name: Lucy Lionheart
Alias(es):
Lucy
Princess of the Faeries [locked]
Master of the Faeries Fist [locked]
Gender: Female
Age: 10
Birthday: 28th April
Sexuality: Straight

[Characteristics]
Height: 115 cm
Weight: 22kg
Hair: dark blue
Eyes: brown

General Appearance: Lucy is 115 cm and weighs 22 kg she has long dark blue hair and brown eyes. Lucy wears all sorts of clothing as long as their cute and age appropriate, she has pale skin, no scars, and piercings. she will have the guild tatoo on her right shoulder with the fairy tail crest in bright blue color. it is said lucy has expressive facial features an example one could determine that she is angry by an intense look in her eyes. She also has a smile that is said to lighten up the mood, its very bright and enthusiastic.

Personality: Lucy is difficult to describe she is young and has had a terrible childhood witnessing traumatic events that has traumatized her, because of that Lucy is mousy and timid with no confidence in herself, she is easily afraid and very shy. She will hide behind people she trust when in the company of strangers.

Some would say Lucy is an odd fit into the rambunctious guild, if someone was to approach her from behind she would scurry off and hide behind the person she trust as if to use them as a human shield and peak out from behind them. Lucy struggles to speak when she has something to say she will whisper into that person’s ear, Lucy tends to express herself in facial expressions like glaring, scowling, frowning and sighing.

Lucy may not show it, but she loves fairy tail. Especially when everyone starts brawling depending on her location she will either be amused or concerned. About the fight, amused that she is out of the way in which case she will cheer on her favorites. Or concerned because she is near it and too afraid to move.

Lucy would love to get involved in the brawling, but has no faith in herself as a wizard and doesn’t believe herself to be capable of fighting or worthy to be apart of the guild. In which times Lucy spends a lot of time by herself training trying to become stronger and braver so she can feel that she is worthy of being in the guild and so she can belong and truly feel at home, Which is why she trains all night and sleep during the day.

Lucy is afraid to sleep during the night, because she is afraid to be alone and vulnerable at night with no one looking after her, which is why Lucy sleeps at the guild during the day, she can often be seen sleeping under one of the tables clutching a stuffed husky dog teddybear in the fetal position. If she is awakened she tends to scowl, glare and get very cranky which is said to make her look adorable because of her youth.

If Lucy is in a situation where she has to fight she would run and hide which is something she is good at and one of the reasons why she uses spells to attack her foes senses. Lucy has unwavering resolve for the right purposes an example if someone or something she cares about is in trouble, Lucy will surprises others and herself by fighting to protect it, by proving deep down under all the fear and low self esteem, there is a wizard worthy of fairy tail.

Lucy is far from perfect, most of her flaws are that of childrens, Lucy never packs up her lego blocks, she leaves them around on the floor for other members to step on and  because of her age she can be quite bratty and if she doesn’t get her way she will cry on cue, Lucy can be needy and at times she will pester other members for things, whether it be for affection or to tell her a story.

She also happens to have a habit of pestering the adults that she trust by asking them endless questions and embarrassing questions. Lucy ‘s childlike curiosity also leads her to taking things that doesn’t belong to her. She also flees at the sight of chores, schools and homework. Because she is a child she can be quite selfish at times.

Little Lucy also has a temper something fierce, it’s really hard to antagonize her, but once she is antagonized she goes something fierce she will trash the place and pounce the one who as antagonize her and go into super brat mode.

Likes:

Fairy Tail: Lucy loves the guild although she is shy and doesn’t participate in the brawls at the moment she finds all the guild members entertaining, she often smiles when one of them are doing something stupid or they fight for no reason.

Stories: Lucy loves hearing stories, although she is way to young to drink she can often be found at the guild’s bar under the table listening to stories that the members tell of their mission until she falls asleep

Training: Although she is a coward, Lucy loves to train and spends most of her nights training to become a stronger person, she  tends to have a reverse cycle of sleep so she spends her nights training while everyone else sleeps and sleps during the day which seems to make her appear lazy.

Music Lucy loves music, although her taste aren’t that of a typical 10 year old, she loves classic and modern rock and roll, punk, metal and some pop music, she isn’t the type of girl to care about bands but will generally love the songs and make no effort to care about the band members detail.

RainLucy loves the rain she likes the scent of the air, the color of the sky and the atmosphere, she is generally happiest at this kind of weather.

Animals: Lucy loves animals one of her favorites is husky puppies she wants one really bad whenever going past the pet store and she sees one she tends to spend up to thirty minutes at the windows watching the puppies

Dislikes:
Dark Guilds: Lucy’s parents were killed by dark guilds while on a mission, which made her homeless and an orphan, because of this incident she hates anyone that will kill and use their power to take advantage of he weak.

Night time: Lucy has a fear of sleeping alone at night time, because everyone else is asleep and there is no one to look after her while she sleeps, so to resolve this, she sleeps during the day and trains at night, to stop monsters and badies from sneaking up on her and catching her off guard.

Sunny weather Lucy hates sunny weather, she dislikes how bright everything is, and hates the heat she likes the dull colors and that rainy weather has to offer her.

Vegetables Lucy hates them, she has a theory the grownups are trying to torture her with it, she avoids eating it whenever possible

Motivations:
Fame Lucy someday wants to become the strongest female member of fairy tail, she wants to be famous and world renown.

Strength: Lucy wants to be a strong person, so she can protect the guild, because she loves them and doesn’t want anything bad to happen to them, she also wants to belong in the guild and for that she knows she needs strength.

Fears:
The Yuckies Lucy is afraid of yucky things, bugs, insects, reptiles, serpents, scorpions, all the things that creeps a girl out she is afraid of.

Dark GuildsLucy is afraid of dark guilds, after her parents were killed by one she has a fear of them that they will hurt her and her new family.


[Life]
Occupation: Tax Break.
Family: Orphan
Medical Conditions: Depression
Pets: Sadly none
Hometown: Cerulean Town
Secrets:  Lucy sneaks her vegetable into her purse during dinner, and buries it at midnight while everyone is asleep

History:
Lucy was born in Cerulean town, and unknown to her, she was born into a guild of dark wizards both her parents belonged to an illegal guild, Lucy had no idea at the time, by the age of four Lucy’s parents were given a mission to go to an uncharted land and investigate claims of demon activity and to study the species to learn more about them and how they operate.

From the age of Four Lucy’s only human contact were that of her parents, so she was unaware that they were evil, because they always treated her like a princess. Lucy  would often at the portable home while her parents studied the demons, she would play with her toys and have imaginary friends.

At the age of Six Lucy made her first friend when she wandered away from her home, a demon by the name of Lucian, Lucy liked him right away because they sort of had the same name. Lucy grew attached to the demon immediately and they were best friends. the demon asked Lucy why humans were in their valley and she told them what she was told, to learn about them because her mommy and daddy were curious, much to the Lucian's relief. Lucian took a great liking to the young Lucy and he showed her their kind of magic a magic known as Zeal.

Lucy spent a lot of time with Lucian after meeting him, she told her parents about him, but they thought he was just another imaginary friend she made up. Lucy spent her days playing with Lucian he even showed her more magic like flying which was something Lucy adored, and asked Lucian would teach her how to use Zeal magic. Lucian curious to see whether a human could use zeal magic agreed to teach her,

Lucy continued her friendship with Lucian playing with him and learning magic from the demon until the age of ten when one evening in the middle of the night Lucy is awoken in the middle of the night to see a massive fire in the demon’s village when she went to her parents bed, they were gone and when she went to the village to find Lucian, Lucy saw the corpse’s of both her parents and  the village near empty, she witnessed her friend Lucian fighting the dark guild and getting killed by them in the process.

Young Lucy ran home and hid under her bed for the rest of the night, and when morning came around she left her home and eventually made her way to Magnolia and heard of a place known as fairy tail, always wanting to meet faieries Lucy made her way there only to encounter something completely unexpected.

[Guild & Magic]

Guild: Fairy Tail
Guild Tattoo: Right shoulder – Sky Blue

Magic: Zeal Magic
Caster or Holder: Caster.
Description: Zeal magic is said to be distantly related to light magic it is a type of caster magic that use psychical energy from every cell in the body and spiritual energy gained from the mind, once the energy is molded it can be channeled through her body  which is circulatory to the blood system making her blood a little unusual. This type of caster magic allows Lucy to use her in a combination of ways she can do concussive attacks that can do blunt force trauma, internal damage even attacks that pierce the skin, it could be defensive spells like creating a bright light to blind the foes, or creating shields, to supplement attacks to boost ones psychical strength or speed.

Strengths:
Zeal magic allows the user to become sensitive to magical energy, meaning that they can sense the level of a person’s magical energy level and sense magical energy within the environment.


Weaknesses:  Time is usually a crucial factor in Lucy’s spells, smaller spells don’t really require much time for the spell to be launched while bigger spells and stronger spells require time for Lucy to mold the energy that she needs for the spell, the bigger spells also require a cool down time the stronger they are the more time lucy need before she can replenish her energy to use it again.

RP Sample:
Lucy sighed quietly as she walked down the streets of Magnolia, it had been a long few days and the poor kid was dead on her feet, she had spent the last few days traveling by foot away from her home, where she had lost her parents and her friend Lucian the demon. Lucy had no idea of what she was going to do with herself, she missed her mommy and daddy a lot and it still hurt to think of them, so she tried her best to keep herself busy and maybe with a bit of luck someone would help her out.

Lucy continued to walk until she made it to a park, she was bummed out and as she laid on the park bench and closed her eyes for a few minutes when she felt a cold shadow hover over her, the young girl opened her eyes and jumped to her feet to see a boy about her age only bigger. The young girl shivered when he told her to give him all her money, the girl told him she didn’t have anything, she yelped when he shoved her to the floor.

Lucy looked at the over grown bully he leaned in close and out of fear the girl raised her hand and a white ball of enery came out smacking the kid in the stomach with enough force to knock him over. Lucy got up and gasped she leaned over the boy “um…sorry” She stammered and scurried off.

Lucy had found herself back in the streets, the young child looked around and found herself back on the streets. She stopped when she over heard a lady speaking about how rambunctious fairy tail was, Lucy’s ears perked up when she heard about fairy tail, she thought that the lady was talking about actual fairies, Lucy asked about the place where faeries lived and when she was directed on how to get there the girl ran there with excitement “Faeries Faeries I want to see faeries.” Lucy couldn’t wait to see the faieries when she ran to the building she opened the door to look around and see no faieries, she sighed when all she only people, The girl frowned feeling bitterly disappointed.

Username: Lucy Lionheart

Face Claim: Wendy Marvel – Fairy tail
Desired starting level: 3


Last edited by Lucy Lionheart on Mon Apr 28, 2014 10:24 pm; edited 1 time in total

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Re: Lucy Lionheart

Post by Tatsuma on Mon Apr 28, 2014 10:11 pm

Okay the first issue I noted is that you have one too many "*" in your stat pool. You get a starter of 15 but you have 16 in right now. You'll need to be approved for level 3 before you'll be able to put one more point in.

The next notable issue with the app is the use of curse words in non-history or rp sections of the application since "ape shit" is technically not necessary as a descriptor for her temper.

on your motivations you might want to change "protest" to "protect"... Unless you're actually wanting her to try to protest the guild. It's not going to affect whether or not it gets accepted, just thought you might want to clarify that but it's at your discretion :).

Now back to seriousness, last issue I see is that she was trained by Lucifer. Whether you're actually meaning "Unholy star, Most unclean, Satan, The Betrayer...." or not, we have a policy here about using biblical or extant names from religious references because it can cause people to become offended. I understand you may be looking for a name close to Lucy, and "Lucian, Lucius, Lucitere, Lustere, Lucky, or Luce" are all perfectly acceptible, "Lucifer" is not.


Once the above issues are fixed please bump to let me know and we'll get this app up quick fast and in a hurry :).

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Re: Lucy Lionheart

Post by Lucy Lionheart on Mon Apr 28, 2014 10:25 pm

bump sorry about the the protest is accidental i did this app half asleep and when i woke up

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Re: Lucy Lionheart

Post by Tatsuma on Mon Apr 28, 2014 10:33 pm

Oh No need to appologize. I only mentioned that trying to make you smile since I do understand that having to rework an application that you've already worked so hard on can be a bit of a downer.

No need to worry about that now because you are
APPROVED.

Welcome to the revolution, Viva La Fun times

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Re: Lucy Lionheart

Post by Maxus on Wed Apr 30, 2014 9:24 pm

Alrighty, so Tatsu is new and I apologize for this. He missed a few glaring issues, all revolving around your magic portion of the App.

Both Strengths and weaknesses are under the word count.

Strengths: You're at 31 words, the minimum is 75. List what makes your magic strong. Like how it's light element, so it's effective against shadow magics. Tell us how it's strong in combat, or has a lot of utility. You said in your magic description that it can make shields and attack. Versatility is a strength too.

As a side note, you CAN keep the sensing part in your strengths. HOWEVER it is not a passive thing like the dragon slayer's sense of smell. It will HAVE to be a spell you make. As long as we're clear on that, you're good there.

Weaknesses: 70 of 75 words. Close, but not quite there. Weaknesses for your magic could include that it's not so good in darker places. If you're sensing magic, someone using magic could "Blind" or "Deafen" you in a sense. Is your magic all close range only? That could be a weakness. These are just suggestions, just like strengths to make you think a little more.

The cool down you mention in weaknesses confuses me. It's not really a "Weakness" if it's just the system we're using. If you're saying your spells would have longer than normal cool downs, that's fine. But if not, you should take that part out.
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