Fiera Ignus (Two Handed)

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Fiera Ignus (Two Handed)

Post by Verity Lohlepher on Tue May 27, 2014 6:33 am

Fiera Ignus

Weapon type: Staff (Modified)
Power: *****
Speed: ***
Range: **
Durability: ***

Spells:

Spell name: Burning Circle
Element: Fire
Rank: 2
MP cost: 15 - 30 (Depends whether the overcharge is activated or not)
Effect: When casted the proper way, the user stands in a stance where their feet is placed directly vertical from the ground and is spaced evenly. They hold the broom over their shoulder and is slightly twisted away from their feet. The user then twists their body back to its normal position while swinging the broom sideways and then pointing it directly at its chosen opponent. They must yell ‘BURNING CIRCLE’ before they start re-arranging their body in the correct position. The broom will catch a light at the bristles while the pole will becoming burning hot to touch to anyone either than the user. It then proceeds to release a steady stream of fire that is directed towards the target. When cast with only one hand on the broom, the spell loses the ability to heat up the metal in the pole and the flames that emerge are much weaker. On the other hand, when it hits the jackpot way of casting the spell, the broom will start producing its flaming rings at the top of the broom before exploding outwards. When the jackpot is hit, the overcharge extra will kick in, if not, the spell continues as per normal. The jackpot is hit when the user spins around in a circle while saying ‘FIERA IGNIS BURNS MY FLOOR FAIRLY WHEN I SWEEP’ followed by ‘Burning Circle’. The target will experience burning if the spell doesn't miss.

Power: **(*)
Speed: *(*)
Area: (*)
Extra: Burning, Overcharged, Ranged



Spell name: Flaming End
Element: Fire
Rank: 1
MP cost: 10 - 20 (Depends whether the overcharge is activated or not)
Effect: The user raises the broom stick above whilst gripping the pole towards the bit without the bristles before bringing it down and yelling ‘FLAMING END’. The broom, already glowing pink by then will erupt in flames by the time it has reached its target. This is the proper way of casting the spell. The bad way is when the spell is casted when the user is holder the broom near the bristles. Instead of lowering the attack’s power, it attacks the user instead. The jackpot way activates the overcharge and it is achieved by holding the stick in the middle of the pole and being airborne. The target will then be engulfed by the flames and burnt when hit by the flaming end  of the broom.

Power: ***(*)
Speed: (*)
Area: (*)
Extra: Burning, Overcharge


Description
Fiera Ignis takes the form of a burnt broom with the words ‘Fiera’ carved in its steel. Its total height is 150 cm with the bristles of the staff like weapon being 25 cm and the pole, 125 cm. The pole in its design is a solid silvery colour with paint of black, red and brown all over the top. The bristles of the broom, although still steel, can bend and is also painted the same way as the pole as well as with extra actual bristles added in. When these bristles brush against an opponent, scratch like marks like a cat could be expected to appear, only less deep. To any old observer, the broom looks like it has experienced a fire and doesn’t really have much use. It is an ugly weapon at first glance due to its burnt coat of paint, however, upon second glance, a person might begin to see the beauty in the way the broom is slightly curved and the mesmerising steel underneath.


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Re: Fiera Ignus (Two Handed)

Post by Tatsuma on Thu May 29, 2014 9:12 am

The item itself looks good there is just one/two problems.

1.) Only your dagger OR your broom will have 11 *. The other will only have 10 because one item is taking the place of a rank 2 spell it gets 11 * the other takes the place of a rank 1 spell so it gets 10 *'s and

2.) Your spell for the broom is located in the magic section and is different you'll probably want to copy and paste that just to avoid confusion. Once those two things are fixed they can both be approved. You'll need to remove the "(modified)" section on the overcharge and reword them like you did in your magic.


Looking forward to approving these :) have a nice day and I'm excited about the chance to RP with our you.

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Re: Fiera Ignus (Two Handed)

Post by Verity Lohlepher on Thu May 29, 2014 11:31 pm

Bump :)

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Re: Fiera Ignus (Two Handed)

Post by Tatsuma on Sat May 31, 2014 9:38 am

approved, this looks good


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