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Fiera Ignus (Two Handed)

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Post by Verity Lohlepher Tue May 27, 2014 6:33 am

Fiera Ignus

Weapon type: Staff (Modified)
Power: *****
Speed: ***
Range: **
Durability: ***

Spells:

Description
Fiera Ignis takes the form of a burnt broom with the words ‘Fiera’ carved in its steel. Its total height is 150 cm with the bristles of the staff like weapon being 25 cm and the pole, 125 cm. The pole in its design is a solid silvery colour with paint of black, red and brown all over the top. The bristles of the broom, although still steel, can bend and is also painted the same way as the pole as well as with extra actual bristles added in. When these bristles brush against an opponent, scratch like marks like a cat could be expected to appear, only less deep. To any old observer, the broom looks like it has experienced a fire and doesn’t really have much use. It is an ugly weapon at first glance due to its burnt coat of paint, however, upon second glance, a person might begin to see the beauty in the way the broom is slightly curved and the mesmerising steel underneath.


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Post by Tatsuma Thu May 29, 2014 9:12 am

The item itself looks good there is just one/two problems.

1.) Only your dagger OR your broom will have 11 *. The other will only have 10 because one item is taking the place of a rank 2 spell it gets 11 * the other takes the place of a rank 1 spell so it gets 10 *'s and

2.) Your spell for the broom is located in the magic section and is different you'll probably want to copy and paste that just to avoid confusion. Once those two things are fixed they can both be approved. You'll need to remove the "(modified)" section on the overcharge and reword them like you did in your magic.


Looking forward to approving these :) have a nice day and I'm excited about the chance to RP with our you.
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Post by Verity Lohlepher Thu May 29, 2014 11:31 pm

Bump :)
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Post by Tatsuma Sat May 31, 2014 9:38 am

approved, this looks good

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