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Ren Caverly level 4 free spell

Post by Ren Caverly on Tue Jun 03, 2014 7:52 pm

Shadow Whip:
Spell name: Shadow Whip
Element: Dark
Rank: 4
MP cost: 30
Effect: A thin shadowy line darkening the area around it appears in the caster’s hand. It is wrapped around her wrist as if it cannot be pulled from the caster’s grasp. However if someone grabs the whip and attempts to jerk the caster forward, they can easily release the magical whip. The whip is fast and very painful when touched. It lingers for two posts after the one in which it is cast.

Power: ***
Speed: *
Area: 0
Extra: ***
Engulfing(Free), Ranged, Lingering**

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Re: Ren Caverly level 4 free spell

Post by Charlotte on Fri Jun 06, 2014 3:50 am

Spell looks fine but you say the whips darken the area around it? How far? Also, you have too many stars in the stats. You are allowed 6 stars and you used 9.

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Re: Ren Caverly level 4 free spell

Post by Ren Caverly on Fri Jun 06, 2014 12:10 pm

Let me try to respond to this. Yes, it darkens the area, because her dark magic gets Engulfing for free. I use that with all of her spells just to express the general darkness of her magic. I imagine it doesn’t go more than several inches, but I don’t know. Due to trying to keep things organic and less numerical, a lot of distinct measurements were taken down. I’ve never had to say how far it is, its pretty much for flavor, especially since she’s never fought another character.

As far as the stars. No I don’t. “Level 4: 7 *'s” It is a level 4 spell, so she gets 7 stars for that, not six. Also I didn’t use 9. I used 7. Note that its three in power, one in speed, none in area, and three more in extras. Seven. As I’ve always done for her spells, I list the specific extras on the next line. I even put the amount of stars next to Lingering to know it got two of the allotted 3, and of course the other goes to Ranged, and Engulfing is free. Anyway, I used 7 of the 7 allowed, not 9 of 6.

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Post by Charlotte on Mon Jun 09, 2014 8:29 am

Welp, I must have read things wrong then. Anyway, the darkening part was asked just for my knowledge cause it sounded vague as it was. Sorry. Also, I thought you put in 9 stars because you put 3 in extra and then put 3 stars on lingering underneath it. My fault for not reading it correctly. Anyway. Approved.

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