Raisou [Lightning Nail]

View previous topic View next topic Go down

Raisou [Lightning Nail]

Post by Guest on Sun Nov 17, 2013 7:45 pm

Raisou [Lightning Nail]
Spoiler:

Weapon type: Katana
Power: **
Speed: ****
Range: *
Durability: ***

Default Lacrima setup:
-Primary Lacrima: Lightning Lacrima
-Spell Lacrima: “Donryoku”
-Spell Lacrima: “Kyoryokuna”
-Extra Lacrima: Shocking
-Extra Lacrima: Overcharged

Description
Raisou is a katana forged from the claw of a powerful Kaminari Liger, hence the name 'Lightning Nail.' It was the best and final work of renowned swordsmith, Yakitori Shinichi. Given to Shin during his visit in Yamato, it had served him very well especially during the unexpected invasion of barbarians from the South. The katana and sheath were created intricately, with an emphasis on elegant details. The blade is onyx, tipped with silver. The sheath carved from the holy Night Sakura tree, lightweight yet sturdy. Raisou is a katana designed to have less friction between the blade and the sheath, ensuring a quicker and deadlier draw


Last edited by Shinkuro on Mon Jan 06, 2014 4:23 pm; edited 5 times in total

Guest
Guest


Back to top Go down

Re: Raisou [Lightning Nail]

Post by Roejaster Rallands on Sun Nov 17, 2013 8:09 pm

Black Lily has been approved!

_________________
avatar
Roejaster Rallands
Fairy Tail C
Fairy Tail C

Posts : 101
Experience : 51
Primary Magic : REQUIP:Gunslinger
Secondary Magic : N/A

View user profile

Back to top Go down

Re: Raisou [Lightning Nail]

Post by Guest on Sun Jan 05, 2014 6:45 pm

I went ahead and pulled this for you Jacob. That way you can make edits to the extras you have if you so choose. Bump when you are positive it is how you want it to be.

Guest
Guest


Back to top Go down

Re: Raisou [Lightning Nail]

Post by Guest on Mon Jan 06, 2014 6:09 am

Bump!

Guest
Guest


Back to top Go down

Re: Raisou [Lightning Nail]

Post by Guest on Mon Jan 06, 2014 3:18 pm

Okay so there are a few problems with this weapon. First off, you only get 10 stars for the weapons attributes not 11. Please take one out where needed. Second off, it is minor, but the higher ups tend to frown on things being made from dragons. So if you can change that in the description that would be awesome. Finally, you only get to start with two Extra Lacrima, not three. It doesnt matter how many your weapon can hold, every person starts out with two spells and two Extra Lacrima. Bump when edits are made.

Guest
Guest


Back to top Go down

Re: Raisou [Lightning Nail]

Post by Guest on Mon Jan 06, 2014 4:23 pm

BUMP!

Guest
Guest


Back to top Go down

Re: Raisou [Lightning Nail]

Post by Guest on Mon Jan 06, 2014 4:26 pm

Well I suppose everything looks fine now... Approved.

Guest
Guest


Back to top Go down

Re: Raisou [Lightning Nail]

Post by Sponsored content


Sponsored content


Back to top Go down

View previous topic View next topic Back to top

- Similar topics

 
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum