Karl Ruprecht Kroenen

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Karl Ruprecht Kroenen

Post by Guest on Thu Mar 20, 2014 8:27 pm

Karl Ruprecht Kroenen


[Attributes]
Power - ***
Agility -  ****   
Toughness - **
Intelligence - ****
Willpower - **

[Basic Information]
Full Name: Karl Ruprecht Kroenen
Alias(es): The Controller
Gender: Male
Age: 36
Birthday: December 25
Sexuality: Straight

[Characteristics]
Height: 6'1
Weight: 130 lbs
Hair: Black
Eyes: Grey

General Appearance: Kroenen is a slim man of a relatively tall height. As for his facial features, he has faint shadows right under his grey eyes, and his mouth is usually seen in a smile. He has black hair, a majority of which is obscured, save for his sideburns and small black goatee by the northern-style fur hat that Law wears, which is white and has spots on the bottom and along the rim. He has many tribal-style tattoos on his arms; on both of his hands, are the letters D, E, A, T, and H tattooed in black on each of the back of his fingers. He also has a black cross on the back of both of his hands. On his chest, he has a tribal-style heart tattoo with a odd sun tattoo on it. He has simpler heart tattoo on his shoulders and his same sun tattoo tattooed on his back. He usually wears a long black coat with his usual sun like Tattoo along the hem and on the sleeve. He wears black boots as well.

Personality: Kroenen is an extremely laid-back character, who is nearly always seen calmly smiling. The only times he is shown not smiling was when he is incredibly shocked, explaining something to other people, frowning in deep thought, or deeply embarrassed. He usually smiles when he's trying to provoke someone or is pleased that a plan went as it was intended. He also has a more reckless attitude when faced against others. However, he hates being ordered around, and is capable of knowing when he and his immediate allies are in a pinch, and is not above resorting to forging brief alliances with rivals for survival. He speaks in a politely sarcastic manner. He also appears to be honorable enough to refuse taking credit that is due to others. He also appears to have a sense of honor (or at least respect for those he sees as potential rivals in the future). Despite Kroenen's terse and rather cruel demeanor towards others, he has shown to have some measure of compassion. He is also very blunt when responding to people. He also has no qualms explaining to other people on how he accomplished nullifying their attacks with his abilities, and before that, even states to those he is about to kill that weaklings do not get the right to choose the manner in which they die.
Likes:

  • Taking Naps
  • Sharpening his katana
  • Eating ramen
  • Watching events unfold
  • A good book
  • A nice summers day

Dislikes:

  • Those who think they can justify needless murder
  • Authority Figures
  • Those who he cant defeat
  • Most birds
  • Bread: He just can tolerate its texture and quality
  • Water since he cant swim
  • People that do not try their hardest
  • People that give up
  • Most forms of liquor
  • Spicy foods

Motivations:

  • Kroenens biggest motivation is to find the meaning of his magic and how to truly master it since how he gained its power is still a mystery to him.
  • To find the Dark Continent where he originated from to hopefully find out who he actually is.
  • Kroenen's one true motivation in this world is to become stronger and help those who are weak. He shows this by standing up for those who cannot fight for themselves such as the elderly and young since he knows how it feels to be in there place.

Fears:

  • Drowning since he cant swim: With his fear of large bodies of water Kroenen never learned to swim so he fears falling into rivers thinking he will drown.
  • Unable to save those who are weak: Kroenen's greatest fear is being incapable of saving those who cant fight making him strive to become stronger to save all those who can fend for themselves.


[Life]
Occupation: Wandering Swordsman for Hire
Family: Adoptive Parents Deceased
Medical Conditions: None
Pets: None
Hometown: Oshibana
Secrets: None

History:
Most of Kroenen's past is unknown but what rumor goes around is he is from a mysterious island that seemed to move and vanish  which some deemed the dark continent. But his reason of leaving this island is mysterious but some think its because he found a way to off this island as a young kid. Upon coming to the main land the shock had Kroenen's mind wipe making him forget who he was and how he got there, he just had a knowing suspicion that he didnt belong. He wandered the land in search of where he once lived but had no knowledge of this land and its inhabitants. After a few years of wandering the lands the boy got jobs in the market places in a town called Oshibana. The townsfolk found the boy wandering the town at night about 3 years ago as if he was searching for something. The people took the boy in and upon asking him his name the boy didn't remember so one family decided to take him in as a son of there own.

The family named the boy Karl Ruprecht Kroenen, even though he preferred to be called Kroenen. He was frightened at the beginning hiding in his room most of the day and only accepting the food that he deemed was good for him thinking some of it was poisoned. After a year in the family's care Kroenen took a liking to them and began to help them around the shop. One day Kroenen accidently used a odd form of magic creating a blue like bubble around the shop and seemed to be able to control all in it. Upon seeing this a wandering mage who was a normal visitor for the town and enjoyed coming to his adoptive parents shop.

The mage wished to talk to Kroenen one night he asked if the boy would love to learn magic to improve his unnatural strength. Kroenen gave his answer by saying he didnt wish to leave a family who atleast made him feel at home. As he left the tavern there was a ruckus in the streets as a bright light could be seen from the tavern. Kroenen rushed over to it to see his home set ablaze and a figure standing in the fire a devilish smirk on his face as he shot fire from his mouth on the house before turning his head towards Kroenen before vanishing in a bright blaze of fire. His mind was shattered from the sight of his home destroyed and his parents dead.

A few days later the mage approached Kroenen telling him that man was a user of a fire type magic and he seemed to use this power with evil intentions. This angered Kroenen to the point of wanting to search this man out and wipe him off the face of the earth. But now that he had no will to stay in this town he took the mage up on his offer and left to train magic his odd magic. He lived with this mage contantly traveling the lands and mastering his odd magic but also training with a long nodachi katana which he seemed to be able to enhance his cutting range with his magic.

He trained with his magic for another few years even after the old mage died telling Kroenen he would go far in this world if he continued to train and become stronger to help others and after that the mage told him about a island called the Dark Continent and this could be where he originated from. After that conversation the old man died leaving him alone once again. He left for Oshibana to see how the town changed over the years he has been gone. Upon returning he heard rumors of a fire mage wandering the lands. With his wish to learn where he came from and master his odd magic he set out traveling the lands becoming a swordsman for hire while searching out the dark continent and the fire mage who killed his adoptive family.

[Guild & Magic]

Guild: Guildless
Guild Tattoo: Will be in the center of his right palm

Magic: Realm of the Controller
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: This magic allows the user to manipulate anything within a specific area, such as weapons, ships and to a degree people in what was described as a "surgical" manner, within a spherical territory bordered by a light blue aura. Through this ability, Kroenen can dismember people from a distance without harming them, lift or displace objects of any size. People separated by this ability aren't killed and can still feel their separated parts, regardless of the distance. In other words, he can cut through flesh and bone without actually hurting the victim. However, when the power is used on an inanimate object, the power will act as a normal cut.
Strengths: Kroenen typically uses his Magic together with his swordsmanship, making his sword a "scalpel" of sorts while his powers are active. The territory generated by Room marks the range of how long he can strike targets from afar. He generally uses the warping aspect of power to his advantage, at both in and out of battle, to help obtain things that are otherwise beyond his physical reach. The Room Magic makes Kroenen well-suited at fighting long-range battles, since he is practically at full control of an area where anything can happen for as long as his powers are active. However, he is just as formidable in close-range combat.
Weaknesses: A drawback to the magic is that the user of the Room can only use its powers within a specific area, so if the target moves outside the area, they are immune to its powers. It appears that Kroenen has to make hand gestures to use certain attacks. Furthermore, while he can control everything within a particular area, if he is not focused on an opponent they can still move freely. In order for him to swap objects or people inside Room, there must be an object to swap with. It should be noted that when Kroenen creates his "Room", it spreads out with himself in the center and remains in that location until he dismisses it, indicating that the user may not be able to move "Room" once created.

RP Sample:
The sound of water dripping in this small holding cell awoke its lone occupant. "Atleast they had the decency to bandage my wounds" The man said in his head as he sat on bench his arms in front of him locked together in a very tough type of hand restraints and his mouth was gagged to keep him from using his magic. He looked around his small holding cell nothing of noteworthy other than the 2 guards sitting infront of the cell door. "Only two guards they must really think im weak" Viktor continued to think to himself as he flexed his fingers cracking them to test the strength of the restraints. "How long is it gonna take them to get here told them to be here one day after i arrived, this cursed sealing tattoo is starting to itch" Viktor continued to speak to himself in his mind as he stood up and stretched.

He started to make note of all the cracks in this holding cell it seemed to be fairly impregnable and from the scent it was in the basement of the guild hall of Blue Pegasus. It has been over a day since he was defeated by Tali and still with all the interrogating she didnt get a single thing from Viktor except for the usual laughter he gave and rude remarks to her new look which she received from the attack she took full on. As the day drag on Viktor began to plot his escape from this holding cell and hopefully his allies would crash in to aid him in the escape. This would require tact and precision to escape from here but to Viktor tact  would be killing the guards and slowly make his way out. Best way to get them to enter the cell was only one way fake collapsing.

Viktor fell to his knees and made a loud thud on the cell floor causing the guards to jump and turn around to see Viktor laying on the ground. The 2 guards panicked abit thinking this would get them in trouble so they entered the cell to hopefully resuscitate Viktor with some water. As they neared him one of the guards noticed the odd looking tattoo like seal on his back and as he touched it to try and flip Viktor over it glew and vanished. As it vanished Viktor smirked as he brought his head up slamming it into one of the guards chin causing him to fall back clenching his mouth as he looked up to see the towering form of Viktor who turned his attention to the other guard who backed up near the back of the cell. Viktor approached the frightened guard grabbing the sides of his head with the cuffed hands and turned breaking the mans neck.

Viktor grabbed one of the keys off the guard with the snapped neck removing the hand restraints and then the gag. "Ahhhh so much better now what should i do with you" He said as looked back to the other guard who was clenching his mouth and grabbed him by the head and as he did poison began to overflow his head. The man screamed in agony as his screaming turned to gurgling noises then silence. "Now lets lets play the waiting game for Aoi and them to show up" Viktor said as he yawned and began to walk down the hallway still dragging the dead guard grasped in his hand. Viktor stopped at the stairway to reach the main level "Now lets see what going on up stairs shall we" Viktor said with a wicked smile as he looked down to the lifeless body still in his hand. He walked up the stairs and as he reached the door he kicked it open. As the door flung open Viktor walked out his wicked smile on his face as he looked around to notice a large hall and the sound of people talking. Viktor walked towards the main entrance to the hall the body still in tow as he threw it at one of the tables. The limp form slammed into a empty table as Viktor began to laugh maniacally. "NOW LET THE FUN BEGIN" he yelled in his psychotic tone waiting to see the horrid looks on everyone's faces.

Face Claim: Trafalgar Law-One Piece

Desired starting level: 3


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Re: Karl Ruprecht Kroenen

Post by Guest on Fri Mar 28, 2014 4:52 am

Done finally

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Re: Karl Ruprecht Kroenen

Post by Guest on Wed Apr 02, 2014 2:35 pm

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Re: Karl Ruprecht Kroenen

Post by Maxus on Thu Apr 03, 2014 3:07 am

Alrighty, sorry it's taken so long. I've been a touch busy lately. Let's get down to business.

Everything looks in order save for one glaring issue: Your magic.

The main problem with it is it's ability to control other characters. Switching their hearts, attaching them to random objects... while we do allow for this in agreed settings run by the players, it cannot be listed as an actual effect in the magic itself. That's what staff looks at when we approve spells, and we approve spells based on how we're balancing things for events and site wide plot things.

That being said, I like the concept of your magic. The idea of creating a territory and controlling what goes on inside is a fairly cool idea. So if you change it to not directly control other characters, it should be good. Also, you cannot start with your sword and it cannot directly channel magic if it is a mundane sword. However, your magic would still technically affect it since it's like any other object in your "Room". It shouldn't take too long to get the money for a mundane sword if that's what you're after.

If you have any questions, feel free to PM me. Bump when edited.
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Re: Karl Ruprecht Kroenen

Post by Guest on Thu Apr 03, 2014 1:50 pm

Edits made, i think they were

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Re: Karl Ruprecht Kroenen

Post by Maxus on Mon Apr 07, 2014 1:43 pm

Alrighty, it all looks good. You are approved for level 3
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