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Post by Crisis Thu Jun 12, 2014 1:34 am

NIGHTFALL

Weapon type: Sword
Power: ***
Speed: **
Range: *
Durability: ******

Description
Nightfall is a sword with a blade that has been permanently stained with colors like the sunset.  Nightfall is balanced to be held in Crisis’ off-hand and is specced for defense.  It is also cursed, constantly wearing away at Crisis’ life force and sanity and refuses to be left behind.


Last edited by Avernale on Thu Jun 19, 2014 1:26 am; edited 1 time in total
Crisis
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Guildless C
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Posts : 151
Experience : 104
Primary Magic : Requip: Defenstrator
Secondary Magic : N/A
Age : 42

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Post by Maxus Wed Jun 18, 2014 1:27 pm

I cannot approve your sword in it's current state.

Re-equip handles likes a caster type when it comes to magic and doesn't use Lacrima. Take that out.

Bonus stuff based on caster rank is a no-go.

Because Re-equip handles like a caster wizard, the spells go in the spell section. If spells require a certain weapon, post that in the spell there.
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Post by Crisis Thu Jun 19, 2014 1:35 am

Lacrima set up removed.

The + Ranks aren't bonuses. I had written this up before submitting my character app, and I wasn't sure if I was going to be allowed to be Rank 3 and those were put in just in case I had to remove attribute points. The notes have been removed.

I was following Rallands example when I included the spells and figured that it wouldn't be a big deal. Spell list removed. I will edit the spells themselves accordingly.
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Experience : 104
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Secondary Magic : N/A
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Post by Maxus Mon Jun 30, 2014 1:19 am

Looks good. Approved.
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