Vidrio

[Attributes]
Power - *****
Agility - *****
Toughness - *
Intelligence -***
Willpower -****

[Basic Information]
Full Name: vidrio
Alias: Lost demon, Smoldering rage
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Birthday: 19th of February
Sexuality: Straight

[Characteristics]
Height: 6"1'
Weight: 58 lbs
Hair: Black
Eyes: Black but red when magic is being used.

General Appearance: Vidrio is a tall-ish Black haired young man with his hair in a (for lack of better words) spikey mess. Vidrio's eyes are usually a charcoal black in color but glow red when his magic is being used. vidrio usually goes about his days completely shirtless, except in colder climates where he wears a fur lined black cloak. Vidrio wears black finger-less gloves that end just below his shoulders. Around the gloves he has haphazardly wrapped red leather strips to offer some medium of protection. Vidrio wears simple black cargo pants as his leg apparel. Vidrio's body type is very lean and is built to utilize speed efficiently.

Personality: Vidrio is a very sarcastic person, so much so that he has almost perfected the art of sarcasm. Beyond the layers upon layers of sarcasm, Vidrio is somewhat Rough and animalistic, but a nice person in general. Vidrio has a tendency to wear his heart on his metaphorical sleeve and is an honest person when the situation demands it. He makes friends somewhat easily and is loyal to his friends and partners. Vidrio has never been in a romantic relationship, mainly because romance is the one idea that makes him shy or embarrassed, and when close to entering a romantic relationship, manages to talk himself into believing that he isn't good enough for the object of his affections. After a while of this Vidrio has all but given up on romance and has stated more than once that he is the only person without a soul-mate. Vidrio has been described as a funny, friendly and kind person multiple times, and has often helped fellow mages without need for reward. There have been reports however, that vidrio would snap at the drop of a hat. Other reports would state that he would grow cold randomly or, stare out into the distance for hours on end. Vidrio himself has noticed it and suspects it to be the personalities of the demons leaking into his own. This theory was further cemented when he discovered that he would refer to himself as "we" in conversation, or refer to other people as "humans" as if he wasn't one himself
likes:

• seeing new types of magic
  meeting dragonslayers
  music
  happy couples
  sarcasm
  

Dislikes:

• slavery
  dark mages
  insanity
  clouds
  rain
  

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Motivations:

• To be important to someone
  To find a guild
  

Fears: Needles, spiders (to an extent) and death

[Life]
Occupation: Guildless mage
Family: No living relatives
Medical Conditions: None, Perfectly healthy
Pets: None
Hometown: Nowhere yet.
Secrets: None

History:

[Guild & Magic]

Guild: Guildless. might join one in the future.
Guild Tattoo: right pectoral in black with a red outline.

Magic: Takeover: The unwilling
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: Vidrio has the ability to take modified forms of creatures he has taken over. His power is limited to taking over demons though due to the unique, forced nature of his first ever take over. Vidrio's forms are modified in that demons that are four-legged adapt into a more humanoid form when he is using his forms. Demons are usually attuned to dark magic though some have been known to specialize in other elements. His magic also has demons recognize him as a fellow demon and as such allows him to become friends with demons far easier than a normal human would. His magic allows him to use both partial and full take overs
Strengths: (90 words) These forms usually gift vidrio with incredible offensive or defensive boosts, along with elemental attacks to boot. Years of practice with Takeover: the unwilling has allowed him to completely understand the mechanics of the powers of his demons, One of which being that his form boosts his rather poor defensive capabilities without sacrificing his offensive power. As stated before, his magic allows him to connect to demons the same way humans might connect with one another. Like before, this is due to the strange nature of his first take over.
Weaknesses:(128 words) Because of his first take over's very strange nature vidrio has lost the ability to take over anything other than demons completely and he would know, he's tried. It's physically impossible to do it now. He also has to deal with the darker side of all demons he takes over, amplifying his darker emotions. He is able to suppress these emotions outside of battle but in battle he becomes a ruthless monster that stops at nothing to beat an opponent. So far vidrio has been lucky to wrestle control back from the demons long enough to not kill his opponents, only a few would never walk again. He has somewhat control over his demons but it is easy to make him lose control with a well placed taunt. When he has lost control the demon side of him changes combat style. Where vidrio has a more analytical combat approach, his demon fights with a brawler style with no regard to his own health as long as he won't die from an attack. One last weakness is that the element of a demon is easy to determine by appearance alone and so is easy to try and counter from the get go if you can manage to stop being on the defensive.

RP Sample:

Face Claim: Menma uzumaki from Naruto

Desired starting level: Level 3

Okay, i'm gonna list down things you will have to change and take care of.

1. Didn't meet the word count on personality. You have 169 when it should have 200.
2. I'm afraid you cannot have a demon pet. Demons aren't easy to get along with as they are evil creatures and even if you did bring it up as a cub, its demon nature won't let you live in peace. Plus, a pet with an ability is not allowed. You can have a pet that doesn't help you in battles or have any special powers.
3. You didn't meet the word count on your history. You currently has 325 when you actually need 400.
4. I would suggest expanding your history, changing some parts and including some other parts to make it sound more interesting.
5. "He also has to deal with the darker side of all demons he takes over, amplifying his darker emotions. He is able to suppress these emotions outside of battle but in battle he becomes a ruthless monster that stops at nothing to beat an opponent barring death, vidrio would never kill unless completely necessary." Can't help but think you are contradicting yourself here. You say he has to deal with the darker side of his demon which amplifies his darker emotions....So...do you kill your opponents or not?
6. As of now, i can only think of letting you start at level 1. Try improving this app and making it more interesting please.

Bump when you are done.

Have made some changes. see what you think now.

Approved unless an admin says otherwise. And you are approved to start at level 2. I'm making you start at level 2 because your app seems to lack story and not to mention...paragraphs. It doesn't seem like you took much effort in it either. On the positive note though, your app is better than how it was before. ^ - ^