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Post by Travis Moon Mon Oct 27, 2014 9:27 pm

Travis Moon

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Attributes

Power - **
Agility - ***
Toughness - ***
Intelligence - ****
Willpower -***

Basic Information

Full Name:Travis Moon
Alias(es):
Gender :male
Age :17
Birthday :March 15
Sexuality :Bi

Characteristics

Height :6' 1"
Weight :115 lbs.
Hair :white
Eyes :Ocean blue

General Appearance

Travis is a tall 17 year old male with sharp ocean blue eyes and short white colored hair that he likes to spike. He has slightly pale skin and broad shoulders.travis has a slim body with a average build. He prefers wearing dark shades of colors and short sleeved shirts with pants or a jacket if it's cold out. Travis usually sleeps in dark blue boxers in the summer and black,white, and gray plaid long pajama pants during the winter with a v-neck under shirt.

In formal events Travis wears slacks with a short sleeved dress shirt and trench coat. In the winter he wears a jacket with short sleeved v-neck and pants.

Personality

Travis is a person who is passionate about anything creative or artistic. He is sensitive by nature and is cautious and conservative. Travis is very helpful and understanding of the needs of others.  He is a major book worm since he could read. Travis is gentle and protective of his friends but to his enemies he mocks and taunts them while observing them to find their weakness or a pattern of attack.

He is very cunning and strategic and uses the versatile advantages his magic gives him to his advantage. Travis is a very loyal and empathetic person who loves those he considers friends or family and looks at his celestial spirits as a second family to him along with his guild. He has a great fear of being abandoned or left alone because of his dad leaving his mom when he was 5 because she was a Mage and kept that from him because he hated magic users and smacked a crying Travis while calling him a freak as he kicked them out of the house.

After that he slowly got a case of depression which didn't surprise his mother because it ran in their family. Travis acts coldly to people who treat celestial spirits like their beneath them and will gladly voice his opinion. He also dislikes people who act high and mighty who think their better than everybody else. Travis loves to help people who are in need even if it is something small and won't ask for anything in return unless its a celestial gate key. He also is a smart ass at times when he is annoyed or someone asks a dum question where the answer is obvious.

Likes :

Coffee -His mothers mistake was giving him a taste of coffee at the age of 6 since he instantly become a coffee addict to where when you take his coffee he'd bite you.

Swimming - Travis loves to swim and usually would be either found reading or swimming in a lake.

Reading-Travis has loved to read ever since he could read and his preferred genre is fantasy.

Star Gazing- He loves to see the stars at night and usually ends up falling asleep.

Dislikes :

Judgmental parents- Travis dislikes parents who shun or hurt their children because of something they cannot control.

Not getting his morning coffee - Travis hates it when he doesn't get his morning coffee since it helps wake him up for the day.

Arrogant people - He dislikes people that are arrogant because their attitude annoys him.

Being truly alone - hates being isolated and not having his keys whip the him because that means he is truly alone and his thoughts will go dark and depressive.

Motivations :

He wants to learn and become wise and powerful enough so one day when he is older he can create his own guild.

Travis wants to help people that can't defend theme selves and protect those he cherishes.


Fears :

Losing his keys -To him its like losing a best friend and makes him powerless.

Being abandoned -Travis fears that he might be abandoned or betrayed which his why he is so hard on himself.


Life

Occupation :Guild Mage
Family :unnamed mother, unnamed grandma(deceased), and unnamed father(Unknown)
Medical Conditions :slight case of depression
Pets :no
Hometown :Hargeon Town
Secrets :
His depression : Travis doesn't tell anybody about it because he is afraid he will be judged and he doesn't look depressed but thinks depressing things.

History:

Guild & Magic

Guild:Lamia Scale
Guild Tattoo:On his right shoulder in dark blue
Magic:Celestial Spirit Magic
Caster or Holder:Holder
Description: Celestial Spirit Magic is a Magic in which the user summons Celestial Spirits by opening their gates through the use of Celestial Spirit Gate Keys.

These Keys are separated into two classes: the more common Silver Keys and the rarer Gold Keys.Keys for Celestial Spirits are counted in Units (collectively without regard of Gold or Silver),and a Celestial Spirit Mage is noted by how many Units they have obtained.

Strengths:

The strengths of this magic is that it's versatile since some spirits can be used for combat, entertainment, information, and even a cute little pet. And the Mage only uses their magic to summon the spirit and the spells casted by the spirits don't drain the summoner since it's not their spells but their spirits spell being casted. Another strength of this magic is that rare keys such as the gold keys are the only one in the world and is unique unlike silver keys who are sold in stores and that are generic such as there being numerous keys of the Canis Minor Nikori.


Weaknesses:

The weakness is that if his keys are taken he can't use his magic. Another thing that can be a problem is that some contracts made with celestial spirits limit them to certain days they can be summoned since I bet they do have lives to live in the celestial spirit world.

And the major weakness to this magic is the magic doll play which can turn his celestial spirits against him. Also another disadvantage is that some celestial spirits can only be summoned through special condition such as Aquarius who has to be summoned with water.

RP Sample:

Username:Hoshi

Face Claim:Zero Kiryu(Vampire Knight)


Last edited by Hoshi on Tue Oct 28, 2014 7:55 pm; edited 2 times in total

Travis Moon

Posts : 8
Experience : 1
Primary Magic : celestial spirit magic
Secondary Magic : N/A
Age : 25

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Post by Tatsuma Tue Oct 28, 2014 11:30 am

As it is now I can't approve this application the reasons for this are cited below.

1.) It's very difficult to read as it is so we would appreciate it if you would space out your sections and paragraphs. For examples you might look at how other people's apps are spread out.

2.) We don't allow precognition here in any form. It gets abused just about every time and we'd rather not risk it.

3.) your word count for your strengths on your magic is below the 75 minimum so you'll need to fix that.

4.) Please un-bold everything since it's unnecessary and bunches everything up.

5.) No your keys do not get stronger with you as you rank up. Keys have a standard strength, for those to increase you would need to get stronger keys, but they mana they use is still there's. Stronger keys have more mana and more powerful abilities but the keys themselves don't level up.

Once the changes are made bump for completion and I'll be happy to give it a second look
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Post by Travis Moon Tue Oct 28, 2014 2:15 pm

Bump?

Travis Moon

Posts : 8
Experience : 1
Primary Magic : celestial spirit magic
Secondary Magic : N/A
Age : 25

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Post by Tatsuma Tue Oct 28, 2014 2:26 pm

improvements made, but still missing some critical components.

1.) Your strengths section is still short on the word count required for it (which is 75 words)

2.) Again no, your keys do not get more powerful with you as you rank up. You will need to procure stronger keys in order for you to have stronger keys. Bump when edits are made
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Post by Travis Moon Tue Oct 28, 2014 8:45 pm

Bump

Travis Moon

Posts : 8
Experience : 1
Primary Magic : celestial spirit magic
Secondary Magic : N/A
Age : 25

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Post by Tatsuma Wed Oct 29, 2014 9:03 pm

Alright it looks good. You're approved for rank D welcome to FTR! Be advised, your name will be changed to match your account so that you're aware of this change. Your account name is now "Travis Moon"
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