Ren Caverly level 4 free spell

Spell looks fine but you say the whips darken the area around it? How far? Also, you have too many stars in the stats. You are allowed 6 stars and you used 9.

Let me try to respond to this. Yes, it darkens the area, because her dark magic gets Engulfing for free. I use that with all of her spells just to express the general darkness of her magic. I imagine it doesn’t go more than several inches, but I don’t know. Due to trying to keep things organic and less numerical, a lot of distinct measurements were taken down. I’ve never had to say how far it is, its pretty much for flavor, especially since she’s never fought another character.

As far as the stars. No I don’t. “Level 4: 7 *'s” It is a level 4 spell, so she gets 7 stars for that, not six. Also I didn’t use 9. I used 7. Note that its three in power, one in speed, none in area, and three more in extras. Seven. As I’ve always done for her spells, I list the specific extras on the next line. I even put the amount of stars next to Lingering to know it got two of the allotted 3, and of course the other goes to Ranged, and Engulfing is free. Anyway, I used 7 of the 7 allowed, not 9 of 6.

Welp, I must have read things wrong then. Anyway, the darkening part was asked just for my knowledge cause it sounded vague as it was. Sorry. Also, I thought you put in 9 stars because you put 3 in extra and then put 3 stars on lingering underneath it. My fault for not reading it correctly. Anyway. Approved.